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insightguy #1 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · So it begins... ·

wonder why no one commented yet on this.
has major potential but needs some work.

Will fave for updates, but i'll hold my thumbs

Platinumfire #2 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · So it begins... ·

984350 Well I'm open for criticism on where it needs work anytime.

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