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Platinumfire


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OOC Sweetie and Rarity gore fic? :unsuresweetie: Well at least you can spell.

Nitpick: You know, it is better to write-out the number instead of using the symbols for them. "20 minutes" should be "twenty minutes"

Other than that, this is written quite well :scootangel: (even though I dislike the concept :unsuresweetie:)

Dig

*Shivers*
Error; Sweetiebot413 systematic malfunction. Overload.
Proceeding with system reboot.
Error; Restart malfunction.
Erroooo-
R3pai4354ggddddd#FAILURE#
Callsign - 'Terminate Siblings' Activated.

:unsuresweetie:

This is well written. Still not sure why I read it though. :trixieshiftleft:

HAHA! That bitch had it comming!:pinkiecrazy:

They can't be that stupid can they? I mean come on!

How did she tie ALL FOUR of her limbs together if her horn was crushed?! Oh well, they wanna be stupid, that's their problem.

Otherwise pretty good.

865926 Sweetie Belle's horn was not crushed. Rarity's was. Rarity did not tie them together, Sweetie Belle did.:unsuresweetie:

866125

That's what I mean. How would Rarity have done that without her horn?

868544 Well, I guess I still don't see what you are talking about then.

869107

She had no horn. Therefore No magic.

They believe she committed suicide. How would she have tied ALL her limbs like that without anyway to move them. And by them I mean the ropes.

Oh I see. Ok, now that you clarified that. But hey, I made it stand out a bit with SB at the end on what may have happened.

That was....disturbing:pinkiesick:...
I read the description and expected a cuss out, maybe a few kicks then a maybe happy ending :rainbowderp:
Uh...yeah...
I think I'll stay neutral on this story...

only 2 words, the last she would ever speak
"Goodbye Rarity."

Last words huh? Epic story. I personally don't like Rarity either and agree with Sweete's first two outbursts at Rarity completely I just wouldn't torture her and if I did and got away with it like Sweetie did it wouldn't cause me to become a mute. I'd just live my life and let what I did slowly eat away at me until one day decades later it would come out and I would go mad but that's just what I believe. :raritydespair: :pinkiehappy:

962332 But think of it this way, she may have just completely gone insane after that :pinkiecrazy: but beings as she's young, it has more drastic effects, eh? no? lol

Yes very dramatic.:pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh: Do you think there will be a sequel of some sort?

974042 I personally didn't plan on it. But who's to say people might read this more and decide to do one themselves. :rainbowwild:

now kill sweetie belle :D

BLLAAARRRAAAGGGHHHAAAARRRR :pinkiesick:

Totally out of Character, but that never stopped me from enjoying this story. At least you had Sweetie Belle do the killing and not Rarity. Then we would have had the problem I mentioned earlier. It was enjoyable, if brutal. I have a weakness for killer Crusader Stories, and it is that reason that saved it from being deleted from my Nook. Can you do another one, detailing the aftermath of this one.... It looked like Sweetie doomed herself at the end, and I would like to see what happened. Maybe the other Crusaders can get in on the action...

See what I mean by weakness for Killer Crusader stories :D :twilightblush:

Hay, as long as it's Sweetie Belle doing the killing and not being the killed, I'll read it:pinkiecrazy:

-Mudraynebow

Is it bad that I enjoyed this immensely? :pinkiecrazy: There are some grammatical errors though.

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