• Published 20th Jul 2012
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A Lesson Learned - Secret_Shadows



Rainbow Dash tries hard to see an airshow from her idols, but fails.

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Epilogue

The Epilogue

Eventually Rainbow was discovered and she was given detention and summer school, but it didn't matter to her, she got to meet her idols, and that's all that mattered. She eventually did improve her grades and nothing like this ever happened again.


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Rainbow Dash sat in Twilight's Library. Rainbow had wanted to write to Princess Celestia about this for a while now and she started speaking.

Dear Princess Celestia,

Years ago I learned a valuable lesson. Don't give up on something because it doesn't interest you, because some day, it might become relevant in your life, and when you try the thing, you fail because you never gave it much thought. If you try the things that don't interest you and keep trying even if they are boring, you will find that it will benefit you in the long run, and if you still fail, there is always the kindness of other ponies you can rely on if you entertain that worst case scenario.

Your Loyal Subject,

Rainbow Dash

"Come on Rainbow, are you almost done, I want to go to Rarity's place!" Spike said, he had several papers next to him all entitled to Princess Celestia, all with crossed out words and whited out lines of text, torn and bent and piled up in a trash can.

"Yes, this is the one, send it spike" Rainbow said after reading it over to herself.

Spike stood up and wrapped the paper in a red ribbon with a gold seal on it, he threw it up into the air and breathed a plume of green fire and the letter was gone as the fire went out the window and proceeded to Canterlot. The letter appeared next to Celestia in a great puff of green fire...

Comments ( 16 )

The story is complete! I can't wait to read your feedback on this story! Thanks to all of those who took the time to read my story.

And again a special shout out to NaterRang on Deviant Art who made the picture that inspired the story.

941644 the currency rate of Equestria is kinda iffy. 2 bits may buy you some tomatoes ut they will also get you an apple pie or a fritter or a mug of cider. while 8 bits gets you a basket of apples. figure that out!:unsuresweetie:

Economical Math hurts my head. lol. :pinkiesmile:

seriously though if anyone can give me a proper cannon amount of bits, I can change it if you all want me to.

"Eventually Rainbow was discovered and she was given detention and summer school"

Good game, Rainbow.:ajbemused:

Aw man! This is totally awesome! :rainbowwild:

You developed an interesting story framework from the picture. I especially liked the way the characters interacted with each other. The ending was sweet, Dash still gets to see her idols, but she had to face the consequences of her actions.

Five out of five mustaches!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

If you ever decide to write something else based off my pictures, please send me a link! -I really enjoyed this! :twilightsmile:

Thank you, I wasn't expecting you to actually ever find this story, lol.

I would like to personally thank you for making that picture, because its something I can personally connect with in life, Trying hard because something is suddenly relevant and still failing, it inspired me to write this story based on your picture and the description you made for it, truly inspiring good sir.

When I wrote it I wasn't entirely sure that you would approve of use of the picture and I was prepared to take it down, but this is a much better result. :twilightsmile:

Also I'll be sure to let ya know if I use any more of your pictures, it was really just a Google search, I was looking for an inspiring picture and that one came up and I really connected to it :)

Also, now that this long winded comment of mine is over, I would like to be overly critical of my story and a bit honest about the end, I rushed it, It still turned out good, but if I was to go back and do the end again I think most of it would turn out the same but the letter to Celestia in the Epilogue (Which I was trying to make look like the description NaterRang gave for his picture as a shout out) Would have turned out a bit better If I hadn't rushed it.

Very nice. I'm glad Rainbow learned a lesson from all this even if she still got what she wanted in the end.

Hah! FINALLY GOT IT READ!

First things first; there are grammar errors sprinkled throughout. Not that they detract from the story or anything, but yeah.

The story was sweet, simple, and got its message through. That being said, some might think it's a bit TOO simplistic. But it's fluff, and fluff is good.

Well done!

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I'm genuinely surprised someone actually read this story this far after it was released.

I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

It's one of my personal favorites out of all of the stories I wrote.

1836816 Eh, call it the RIL pile up. I got a surprise watch just today; was NOT expecting that.

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Read later pile up? Oh I can sympathies with that, I have 417 stories on my read later list. I intend to read these stories, but real life just gets in the way!

1837700 Yes, the days do have this annoying tendency to only be twenty four hours long...'tis a cruel, cruel world. :fluttercry:

Oh well, procrastinate on other things to read MLP fics. That's a legitimate course of action.

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hmm, school, my little pony stories, graduate, my little pony stories, boring calculus, or exciting my little pony stories.....

I choose My Little Pony Stories! Wait, wasn't there a lesson in this exact story about that? :rainbowlaugh:

Hello there! I enjoyed this story, so I narrated it! Hope you don't mind. :twilightsmile:

7719576 Oh my god this is the first time I've ever had like some kind of reading or anything of one of my stories! Thank you so much for doing that, I love it!!!!!

(Sorry for the 4ish day late reply! I've been busy this week so I haven't been logging on as frequently.)

Edit*: Thanks for fixing some of the typos I made in the story when you read it! At the time I wasn't exactly the best at catching things like that lol.

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