Fluttershy asks Rainbow Dash if she could teach her some flying lessons, but when Rainbow Dash says she'll "be right back" she doesn't return. In this tragic story Fluttershy, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity and Pinkie Pie are faced with dealing with the loss of one of their closest friends.
This story has three authors so some parts may appear different.
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I made an account just so that I could tell you I loved this story, not the best written but I can tell you but a bit of effort into it. Thanks for writing. Also, first I guess or something '
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That......... was sad. Very sad.
But what actually caused the death of 
? Answer question in epilogue or sequel maybe? Oh, and have a moustach 
I would say this story was good
their are a lot of amazing sadfic
writers on fimfiction, I personally
have not wrote one yet, but I hope
I can get started
the one thing
I don't like is that Twilight would try and find a
way to save her friend, a thought came to me
that she's used the time traveling spell to stop her death
I was going to comment with an honest appraisal of your skills and some constructive criticism, but it looks like you don't want any negative reviews, constructive and helpful or not. Your loss.
It was good, little rushed but still good
Naww, Rainbow Dash...
Twilight, y u no have super sad icon!?
935355
Thanks! Also...nice username.
936127
What Kaya means is that she does not want negative comments like, "This story sucks SO bad! Even my crappy dog is better! Don't ever write, your skills are just shit." But constructive criticism is allowed, I personally like to improve on things.
935581
A MOUSTACHE!? 
You'll find out soon enough! Although we haven't planned the next chapter.
938795
Thanks! Yeah, we kind of tried to slow it down...
-S
942067
938795 Don't worry, the next chapter will not be rushed :) 936127 Hey, do you know how overwhelming and annoying it is to get reviews like that? It's not a loss, it's a save. 935999 It's easy to write sadfics, just put alot of emotion into them I guess 
935581 I might just have to edit and add to this chapter! 
935355 It's called 3 authors, that way it wasn't so difficult to write. You'd think it would be difficult with three authors, right? 
Eenope! ~K/C
935355
What Kaya meant to say in her reply to you "It's called 3 authors, that way it wasn't so difficult to write. You'd think it would be difficult with three authors, right?
Eenope!" was that we all shared an equal effort, which made it less difficult then coming up with ideas on our own. Also, thanks! 
This is my first published fanfic so it means a lot to me and I'm sure it means a lot Kaya and Sheal, too.
936127
I would love to hear some constructive criticism. I'm guessing that Kaya sort of has a problem with stuff like that, but please do comment. If you can, could you give a part of the story that lacks the things you think it lacked as an example? Also, thanks for the "honest appraisal of your skills" thing.
-RB
Like it's your choice but I think
you can continue the
story it doesn't have
To end here you have an
Amazing idea here but it's
up to you if you want to continue
The story
945710
Thank you.
althoughiwasnttheonewhoputthatideaidontknowwhybutanyway
We are going to continue the story.
~S
1013659 Oh my god! I missed erasing that, didn't I? Well, we messed around a little while editing the story and I guess it wasn't all removed. I'll get right down to removing that, thank you for pointing it out
~C