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Apples of the Belly

Rainbow Dash turns into an alicorn and goes on adventures. Her friends eat blue apples because red ones are stupid and they all go and defeat Sombra.

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0 #1 · Sep 19th, 2017 · · ·

I don't get if you were trying for randomness (assuming you are being sincere in the author note, which I doubt). It's completely disjoint I'm afraid, and I had almost null amusement while reading. Even in trollfic territory it does not shine: no shock value or innovation of rule trespassing, no offence taken, too much obvious, nothing.

Why do I think this is not serious: one, misspellings smell like deliberate. Two --why I'm even taking time with this-- the context would dictate the author would most likely not know what a Mary Sue or alliteration is. And then some other trope knowledge. So there, that's why my conscience is fine with being mean.

However, I was slightly piqued. The idea of Twilight being sort of an idiot genius who can't count to three is fun. So... have an upvote because red. (That drawing of Applejack is cute too).

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