This story takes place around the time of season seven. Scootaloo begins to feel really depressed about being unable to fly, and begins to suffer from low self-confidence and dark thoughts about it. The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to make it a missi
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I loved your story, and its such a shame it hasn't gotten more attention than it has. The only problems with it were I felt the ending was a bit rushed, and also the reference to 'Russian Roulette'. As far as I'm aware there isn't a Soviet nation in Equestrian canon.
Anyway, I hope more people find this great story. They don't know what they're missing. Keep up the brilliant work.
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The ending was rushed because I was trying to follow a deadline, and it took longer for me to come up with ideas (like how to try to get Scootaloo to fly, how she finally flies, etc.). I didn't intend a reference to Russian Roulette, and I don't even know where that is.
I really appreciate your feedback, and thank you. I think partly why this doesn't get any attention is because there are so many stories out there; it's like anything.
I'll check out your channel and see if you wrote anything.
This story is striking chord within me.
Thankyou author for writing it.
It's not just Rarity who is made of marshmallow.
expanding and deflating Scoota-mallow was interesting.
This was amazing and I love it. Thank you!!!
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