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The secret

It's a story with Pumpkin Cake.
And a secret.
A Terrible Secret.

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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #1 · Jun 18th, 2017 · 1 · ·

You kind of lost me with the "surprise twist" at the end. It was kind of amusing that Mr. Cake did not really have a strong reaction to Pumpkin's news, but it also worked in a way that made sense.

Comment posted by Darkxemjas deleted Jun 18th, 2017

Comment posted by lnomsim deleted Jun 18th, 2017