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Sapphire Rose 12

Hi, my username is Sapphire Rose 12, but you can just call me Sapphire Rose or Sapphire! I love writing scripts and stories on all sorts of things, especially fanfictions of My Little Pony.


Everyone in Equestria is assigned a personal clock to tell them when important things in their life are going to happen. They'll tell them when they'll finally reach a goal they've hoped to achieve and even when they're going to die. The one that most ponies look forward to is when the clock chimes for meeting their true love.

Sweetie Belle is terrified of her clock. Most clocks in Equestria have reasonable hours. Most clocks in Equestria go off at a reasonable time. Sweetie Belle's clock tells her she'll die at the age of twenty. The one that tells her when she'll reach her personal goal is completely stopped and the one that tells her when she'll meet her true love... is chiming.

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Comments ( 6 )

Interesting, I would like to see where this goes.

Telling your story in medias res ("in the middle of things") was, for me, very effective. It adds mystery and makes me want to know what will happen next. Great job!

Hmm, not bad. I look forward on seeing more.

I'm glad! Thank you for reading! :twilightsmile:

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