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Sapphire Rose 12


If I wrote it before 2018, please don’t read it.

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Soarin feels as if nothing is going his way. Then, he meets Storm Whirl. A mare who curses him to live in a universe named Sciros where he doesn't exist with nothing but a magical rose. His wife doesn't recognize him at all and all of her friends are different.

There's only one way for Soarin to get home. If he could get Rainbow Dash to fall in love with him by the time the last petal fell, he would get to go back to Equestria. If not, he disappears.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 44 )

7591497 It does? Oops, did I copy something?

Wasn't this the plot to Shrek 3?

7591731 That's strange, considering I've never seen Shrek 3. :derpyderp1:

7591831 But, you've made me want to see it! Thank you! :twilightsmile:

7591843 it's a ride of a film, i can say that much...

7591731 No you're thinking of the fourth movie.

7591897 i am? I'm only remembering 3 here...

7591847 Yeah, there's Shrek, Shrek 2, Shrek 3D and Shrek the Third.

3D movie is utter garbage.

Interesting plot! I look forward to see where this is going :twilightsmile:

This new 'Equestria' is quite…interesting. I wonder what the cause of this was? Can't be Nightmare Moon since the sun is up…

7591573 It sound similar to Disney's Beauty and the Beast. Was this intentional?

ME LOVE THISH STORY ME NEED MORE!!!

7605961 This comment made my day! You are so sweet! :raritystarry:

I'm planning on posting Chapter 5 soon, so hang in there! :raritywink:

It's interesting, so far. I kinda enjoy it; however, I think it was a bit rushed (just a teeny tiny bit). I mean it was already good, but you might add more details or descriptions for making it smoother.

He most likely will get home but then again it's your story

I'm glad you updated! Btw, it sounds like it's gonna end soon, isn't it?

7646526 Yes, there are 3 more chapters after Chapter 8.

DASHIE!!! JUST SAY I WUB YOU!!!!

I hate you
you just had to make the cliffhanger didn't u

NOPE. HE NOT DEAD. HE JUST SLEEPING. TOTALLY...

YOU MONSTERRRR!?!!!!!!!! WHY LEAVE US ON A CLIFT HANGER AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!???!:fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::pinkiehappy::fluttercry::fluttershysad:

This was sooo adorable and I'm so glad that Soarin din't die and FIRST:pinkiecrazy:

7678552 For once? How many sad fics are there out there? :rainbowhuh:

This is one great story! I read it all!:pinkiehappy: Here, take a follow!:yay:

If dash does fall in love with him, wouldn't it be horrible if he left her? I mean, would you leave someone heartbroken for your own sake? Bye then again, it would be bad for the equestria rainbow dash if he wouldn't come back...
Yeah I'm thinking into this way to deep....

I loved this story but I still feel bad for soarins not wife rainbow dash....

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Oh, don't worry. Her friends are there to cheer her up. She'll be okay in time. :twilightsmile:

At least, it was quiet uptown.

🎶he is going through the unimaginable🎶
Hamilton refrence hopefully:heart::pinkiehappy:

Actually, my first thought was that it was that pony who sent Soarin here!! But.... something tells me I'm wrong. Can't wait to find out though, great story!!👍

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I know, it's really sad. Scoots is an awesome character. My fav CMC, definitely.

RD kissed him, and said I love you. He'll be FINE, duh.

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