Discord, bored of the world after ruling it for centuries, senses his up coming demise and visits another world overflowing with chaos. After seemingly picking a random creature, he offers the biped a tempting choice to keep things chaotic.
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Celly got thrashed well and proper like
i just love and hate the tyrannic celestia portrayed in this, same with other fics as well!
Oh ho ho, bug sex incoming
You're going to regret not killing Xenolestia.
Changeling hatchling when they look like the black ensectoid pony don't have hooves they look like disgusing maggots so what you say about about chrysalis wanting too hear the sound of little nymph's hooves running about is invalid
Enjoy the criticism
Bug. Smex. Is key to something
We will build a wall around Mexico xD, sorry can't help myself
*wants
"ponies" needs a possessive apostrophe
And make Equestria pay for it!
Chryssie nuuuuuuu! D:
Sunbutt's a cunt.
I see he countered the Elements of Harmony with the Elements of Kicking your Flank.
Bug smex!
'the arrow is surround in energy' - surrounded by
'Now that Celestia is gone, what will you do now?' - second now is unneeded
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fixed :)
Welp. I called it.
8829597 Making the Changeling Kingdom great again!
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If I was in this AU, I would wear a MaChKGA hat.
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Why does everyone use Xenolestia? It's boring and overused anyway enough about that
Can i interest you in my lord and savior world customize creator?
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What is this World Customise Creator thou speaketh of?
Eeeeeeeh. Not my thing.
OC is literally a god and looks to be invincible, Tyrant Celestia, Chrysalis shilling... this just ticks all my no-no boxes.
One thing I definitely commend you for is giving him a conscience. You wouldn't believe how rare that is in stories like this one. Even so, I don't think I can get invested in it. I don't care about Carl and characters I would normally care about are getting twisted to raise him up.
The funny thing is you're actually holding pretty well to canon in terms of personalities for Celestia and Luna. Luna became Nightmare Moon in the first place because Celestia had become too arrogant and prideful and started ignoring her sister's feelings. This story may have averted Nightmare Moon, and created Day Breaker instead.
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Later on he showed his limits. He only has so much power. If he constantly uses his powers he eventually passes out and is reverted to his pre-god form (a.k.a. chubby gamer boy).
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Does it have any meaningful impact on the story?
Like, if a character passes out from using too much power but whenever they pass out the battle is already done and they can just rest up, then it has no impact on anything. It might as well be cut. A character who's afraid of heights but never has to face any heights might as well not have that flaw in the first place.
And what about the other things? Tyrantlestia, Chrysalis shilling, all that stuff?
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In fact, can you tell me where this impacts the story in a meaningful way? I've been looking through the other chapters and it's just the OC being overpowered again and again and again and again, some more sh*tting on Celestia, the usual.
He is such a roach-horse fucker.
we will build a wall
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To keep out all the
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The first thing Im gonna do is build a 10 foot wall around my land
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not cool...
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If he pushes himself to the point of passing out, he reverts to his old non-godly human form and cant transform for while. This leaves him extremely vulnerable. Also if you don't like OP stories why are you reading a story about a guy who can turn into gods? Literal gods, with godly powers. Gods tend to be OP as hell, and he has over eighty of them.
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"Funniest shit I've ever seen."
This is like my 3rd time reading this, and only now does this come to mind lol
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Okay that got a big laugh outta me x'D
Ah I see you also had that thought when the news came out hmm.
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ahahaahaaaaahhaaaaahaaahhahahaaahaahaahaahahahahahahhhaahhaahahahahahahah too fun