Discord, bored of the world after ruling it for centuries, senses his up coming demise and visits another world overflowing with chaos. After seemingly picking a random creature, he offers the biped a tempting choice to keep things chaotic.
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9309574
Heh, I've read a 800k word story in about 3 or 4 days straight.
blasted the changeling withou letting the explain
blasted the changeling without letting them
I'm liking the story so far.
I have to wonder if he's able to change hero skins as well... like Hunkules or Chef's Special for khepri. If only for the amusement factor.
ME: wlep this *points at the leader* FUCKER IS FUCKING SCREWED
I'M GONNA GET THE POPCORN!! AND THE LAWN CHAIRS FROM COSTCO!! JUST TO SEE THIS FUCKER DIE!! *evil laughter*
Looks like Panth will soon own the Stronghorn clan.
"WAIT" (everyone stops and looks as I grab a lawn chair and popcorn and sit down) "continue"
La escena de la luna un poco demasiado conveniente pero me gustó el capítulo, más capitulos
What's a power lottery story?
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Discord picks random people and gives them powers of their choosing before dumping them into different Equestrias. Like displaced but different.
9310250
Good spot, Fixed.
OK this story just gets better and better
9310602
Huh, that sounds almost exactly like the story I plan to write. Xp
Okay..now I kinda wish we had a story where the character had the a Throne of Heroes as his powerup....simply so we could have Best Boi Asterios,the original ‘Minotaur of the Maze” versus Stronghorn. It would be so epic...
On a side note:
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Slow down! Seriously, one of the major problems with this story is that Carl doesn't talk more and goes from place to place too quickly. We want actual character development instead of boring action scenes that don't even make sense with their random deployments.
This story has no impact on the reader what so ever. If you want to change that and have people remember you make characters that actually have soul in them. The easiest way to do this is to have a lot of dialogue.
Then there is also the problem with Carl being the main character, as in, no one else seems to know what to do without Carl around. The way Carl is depicted makes him look like a sniveling child.
There is also the abusive relationship between Carl and Chrysalis. But, I am not going to get into that when you don't even have a grasp on the basics.
Looks like Carl is going to get another lover.
I LOVE this story so far, good thing that this isn't an Anthro world, because if it was I would think that the 'CARIBOU' would be trying to invade Equestria at this time.
Two men enter
One man leaves
Get your cowgirl, boy
9311014
Closest race to a caribo is the elk, but here they're like elves, but nicer.
Oh ho ho this is going to be good, we have a clash of the Greeks; Hercules vs the Minotaur. Along with some drama to come to Carl's love life, as long as you have Whisper having to follow through with making him her mate. Wait a minute.......
We have Chrysalis; flirty but honest, Dragana; the angry one but is loyal, Shyla; who is timid but kind, Whisper; the (apparently) studious one at magic, Heart Shine; who is so generous she has been powering the crystal heart for years, and ....... maybe Peachy for laughter?
I'll .. just .. be over here, watching.
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Grabs popcorn"
This is getting goooood!
Good job keep it up
9311051
I suspect that even if there were caribou, they'd get roflstomped so hard and fast that there wouldn't even be enough time for them to shit themselves....
Especially now that Celly has been possessed by what is essentially a daemon of the warp from 40K, but in a way worse, for it is cunning and patient unlike daemons....
Worse still, The Nightmare would most likely mind control them into vegetables, they'd be nothing but biological drones slaved to a single master, no free will left in them. Sacks of meat who are dead and haven't yet catched up to the fact yet....
One question I have is why won't Carl fight Celestia right there and then?
He can beat her and her army by himself like last time, Amore the Queens and thier entire army was pretty much useless during last fight.
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This isn't Celestia anymore. But a nightmare that has taken and made Celestia's body stronger. And all her forces are being mind-controlled. Carl wants to subdue them, not kill them.
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And how's gathering an army and preparing for an all out war gonna save their lifes? instead here's a better idea, open up a portal beneath Celestia that leads to nowhere or bitch slap her into the portal or lead her in after all Celestia isn't the brightest of ponies and then proceed to safely beat her into submission, afterwards seal her into a cocoon.
For someone who has access to several gods and different powers Carl isn't very creative with them.
Well this will end messily. Xd
When next awesome chapter!?
9315642
When I get around to it. I have no set dates on chapters.
me like and wow and
9311065
Super Kami Guru: VAIL!! VVVAAIILL!!! Prepare to retrieve the Minotaur body......... and the cow
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*sigh* Yes Super Kami Guru, but what about the Demigod?
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Super Kami Guru: ...... Leave him I'm more interested in that fire pony ...... I would like her for my collection
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Yes sir, *whispers* I really got to get Nail to take this job from me.
Are we gonna do the in-universe equivalent of Guybrush Threepwood and his ghost-killing bottle of fizzy rootbeer?
...Please say yes.
9340358
never heard of it.
Oh I hope it's the moon tear from zelda
Diplomacy is strong in this one.
Bueno, los minotauros son como gigantes comparados a los humanos
Bueno, los minotauros son como gigantes comparados a los humanos