Scootaloo has always been a lovable little filly. She is always cheery, excited and friendly!...When she is with her friends. What about when she isn't with her friends? Well, then she is stuck with an ungrateful, mean mom. But no father, since he left the family because of Scootaloo's mom. But unlike her mother, her father was actually a great Stallion! And it's up to Scootaloo to find out if she can continue living a happy life with the help of her friends! But what happens if a series of hurtful events attack Scootaloo? Will she be able to shrug them off? Or will she reveal a dark side of herself as well?
Chapters (2)
If you're going to write a Scootabuse fic, you have to make sure you nail down her character, she cried like 3 times in the first chapter for very little reason. She's like RD, she wears her emotions on the inside, and only really cracks when exposed to enough stress.
Also, space out the long description, any paragraph longer than 5 lines of text and people tend to stop reading it.
8134219 I'll take your suggestion into consideration. Thanks for the feedback, nonetheless. It's my first fanfic so the only way to learn from your mistakes is to make some first :P.
Why do the gods always make me feel sorry for scootaloo why just why?!?!