Spike and Pinkie were going about their chores as normal. It was their duty, along with everypony else, to move the rocks from the south field to the east field. The twins were behind on their work so they had to stay outside longer. Igneous had just closed the door to the house when it happened. A loud boom caused both Spike and Pinkie to turn and look for the source when they were blown back a little by a strong wind. Pinkie's hair fluffed up and they both saw the most amazing thing, a horizontal, expanding, rainbow ring. They both broke into super-wide grins.
"Wow!" Pinkie exclaimed. "Spike did you see that!?"
"I did!" Spike yelled excitedly, "That! Was! Awesome!"
"We have to show this to everypony!" Pinkie yelled, just as the rainbow dissipated. "Oh....well, we'll have to...show them something else that's just as awesome and fun!"
"But what?" they both pondered. After a moment of thinking, Pinkie smacked her own hoof and declared loudly to her brother, "Let's throw the biggest, most amazing surprise party ever!"
"Yeah!" Spike agreed and together they ran off to the storage silo.
-the next morning-
The Pie family was just leaving the house.
"We better harvest the rocks from the south field," Igneous said, but he and the others stopped when they heard the sound of music.
"Pinkamena Diane Pie, Spike Boulder Pie, is that you?" Cloudy called.
Pinkie's head popped out of the silo door. "Mom, I need you, Dad, and the sisters to come in here quick!" Pinkie yelled as she ran back inside. Cloudy and Igneous looked at each other in confusion, then entered the silo to find decorations, cake, punch, and balloons. Pinkie jumped out from under the tablecloth and Spike floated overhead with the help of some balloons
"Surprise!" They both yelled.
"You like it?" Spike asked.
"It's called a party!!" After a few seconds of looking at what was in front of them, the family's faces all broke out in huge grins. After a few more seconds everypony was partying.
Spike suddenly gasped, "Pinkie! Your flank!" Pinkie looked down and spied a mark of three balloons; 2 blue and 1 yellow.
"Gasp!" Pinkie cried out, choosing to say gasp over actually gasping, "I have a Cutie Mark!" And so on the party went, from dusk until dawn.
Pinkie and Spike never wanted it to stop.
8072023 thank you. I`ll fix that right up
8072023 well I tried to fix it, but Grammer isn`t my strong suite.
Should I be a little concerned that Spike was with Pinkie when the rainboom hit and that he may also learn how to break the fourth wall like her?
8072262 Oh yes, Worry!
What`s the forth wall?
I dunno but lets break it.
I would say for you create some chapters a little more longer because is so small to read, and we want to read more about the Pie's family with Spike. But this is a good story and took my interest.
8072269 Ah, crap.
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Language!!
Don`t worry Pinkie this is story is labeled under Teen.
8072278 I`m planning to make the next 3 chapter`s about Spikes relationship with(in this order) Limestone, Maud, Marble.
8072481 Cool, I think Limestone is a good sister for Spike, it was funny when she said she was in charge of everything, even from Spike. Hehehehe
This story is starting to grow on me. I look forward to seeing what comes next. It'll be interesting to see the changes in Spike's personality.
Though now I'm wondering: Who will be Twilight's assistant now???
Spike Boulder Pie? Shouldn't his full name be an extended first name + a name starting with D, like what they did for Maud in Rock Solid Friendship?
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that episode came out on April 29, 2017
this was written on April 3rd, 2017
also, I used his middle name being bolder as a joke with his and Maud's brother-sister relationship later in the story.
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such a well crafted comment, it leaves me speachless