After graduating first in his class at a hair styling academy, Zephyr Breeze is more confident than ever that he can win over Rainbow Dash. Can her human friend help her find a solution to get the message across to the stubborn stallion?
This is a very interesting story. It's cute, sweet, and a little awkward but it's all properly balanced so it never feels too cheesy or overwhelming. Well done.
The unassuming stand cranks out donuts faster than you anticipated and before long you’re standing in front of an overweight mare with thick, greasy glasses.
Thick greasy glasses? Lol, what? How does she see through them?
I think this is this first story I have read where the protagonist has actually done some research about the cultural differences between not only species, but also tribes, and therefore knew what was going on in real time. Kudos for that bit of originality!
The glorious smell of baked donuts wafts over you as you stand outside the small food cart parked near the end of Ponyville Main Street. It’s a run-down, whitewashed caravan that’s identified only by small red lettering painted on the side by some pony with 3rd grade artistry skills. DONUT PALACE III . It was the equivalent of one of those Mexican border pickup truck burrito vendors. It didn’t look very legit but you knew that meant it was good, that or they somehow made donuts with kangaroo meat . Your nose told you your gut was right.
the worst thing about this fic? Is that I can't forget it so I can read it again and fall in love with it all over again
This is really enjoyable. I'm always down for a good 2nd person rainbow pone fic, but the premise and situation makes this extra interesting!
How long is the completed story?
This is cute so far.
Btw do you have a link to the green pastebin? I'd prefer to read it in full honestly.
Perfectly platonic cuddling, of course!
One of my favorite recent stories thus far. It reminds me of Dash tries to win your Heart by Flutterpriest for some reason.
D’awwwwww!
Such a nice story.
This is a very interesting story. It's cute, sweet, and a little awkward but it's all properly balanced so it never feels too cheesy or overwhelming. Well done.
First time reading and calling it now. Dash put Zephyr up to it so she could try to win Anon's heart.
Fuckin' loving it
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That's the worst thing about any story.
Especially the really good ones.
... I can't shake the feeling "Zephyr" is a paid actor, and RD has a long con in mind... ;]
I mean, it wouldn't be very Dash-esque to just tell him, right?
Okay, I'm now confident enough to leave a thumbs-up. This one is definitely landing on my bookshelves - the question now is: which one(s)?
I mean, it has Xenophilia to live up to, but the going's good so far... ;)
Thick greasy glasses? Lol, what? How does she see through them?
Oof, poor Dash.
I think this is this first story I have read where the protagonist has actually done some research about the cultural differences between not only species, but also tribes, and therefore knew what was going on in real time. Kudos for that bit of originality!
You don't bake donuts, you fry them.
Rereading this before I dive in to the sequel. I'd forgotten how good this story is.