After graduating first in his class at a hair styling academy, Zephyr Breeze is more confident than ever that he can win over Rainbow Dash. Can her human friend help her find a solution to get the message across to the stubborn stallion?
The clop is very detailed and leaves little to the imagination which is great for un imaginative people like me. I understand that some might not like that but the way you wrote it really emphasized the connection between the characters and I love it. This easily ranks as one of my favorite sex scenes (and I've read a lot).
8188270 Still working on it. Almost have the next chapter ready I've just been busy with finals and work. Should be a lot more consistent for the rest of summer.
I like the little cultural idiosyncrasies that are interwoven into this story. It really makes it excellent. Despite how much I despise Anon stories, I really like this one.
Most beings who are not Twilight usually figure this stuff out on their own, so - probably not really all that necessary. ;] As long as you communicate wants and problems clearly and in no uncertain terms, anyway...
“I’m going to be right here when you get back, and I promise we’ll spend all day in bed if you want.”
No drama or Sad tag..... so I guess the Death Flag is not actually set.....
The clop is very detailed and leaves little to the imagination which is great for un imaginative people like me. I understand that some might not like that but the way you wrote it really emphasized the connection between the characters and I love it. This easily ranks as one of my favorite sex scenes (and I've read a lot).
You still working on this? I hope so.
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Still working on it. Almost have the next chapter ready I've just been busy with finals and work. Should be a lot more consistent for the rest of summer.
You dead, or nah? If not, pls work on this, it's a great story.
I like the little cultural idiosyncrasies that are interwoven into this story. It really makes it excellent. Despite how much I despise Anon stories, I really like this one.
Most beings who are not Twilight usually figure this stuff out on their own, so - probably not really all that necessary. ;] As long as you communicate wants and problems clearly and in no uncertain terms, anyway...