After graduating first in his class at a hair styling academy, Zephyr Breeze is more confident than ever that he can win over Rainbow Dash. Can her human friend help her find a solution to get the message across to the stubborn stallion?
8085724 Thanks for the advice. I find that I'm starting from scratch on a few portions of the story, but the vast majority is salvagable despite the horrendus grammar.
Everything happens from Anon's perspective so all the plot development that occurs is either explicit or alluded to through his observations. My entire goal for this story was to make Anon's "slice of life" as realistic as possible for the fictional setting. A lot of the world building and plot development occurs a bit later and it will progress beyond the little feud. Unfortunatley I ended before the next conflict could be fully fleshed out, so I may end up writing a sequel if people like it.
8085724
Thanks for the advice. I find that I'm starting from scratch on a few portions of the story, but the vast majority is salvagable despite the horrendus grammar.
Everything happens from Anon's perspective so all the plot development that occurs is either explicit or alluded to through his observations. My entire goal for this story was to make Anon's "slice of life" as realistic as possible for the fictional setting. A lot of the world building and plot development occurs a bit later and it will progress beyond the little feud. Unfortunatley I ended before the next conflict could be fully fleshed out, so I may end up writing a sequel if people like it.
Thanks and have a great night as well.
That last playful line, “Make me,” absolutely captures the nature of what an Anon x Dash relationship would be like.