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Zenyattaluver677


I love horses, horse racing, my little pony, Rainbow Rocks & cows.

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We all know that Aria and Sonata never really got along before. But that was during The Battle of The Bands. Now that they don't have their pendants and Sonata's been getting scared of lots of things and going to Aria for help, Aria is developing a soft side for her and she'll have to decide sooner or later when she will admit to Sonata. Adagio gets curious about whats going on between the two of them and decided to investigate.

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It looks interesting but... it feels out of character. It's like Adagio and Aria's personalities are switched. I like the idea of Aria having a softer side that she shows to Sonata, but there's not really any signs of a transition from who she was in the movie to who she supposedly is in the story.

8129535 I understand what you are trying to say. I'll have to back and read the story to see where exactly it could be fixed. Thanks for the input. I'll definitely use this input in the future to make better stories.

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