I was expecting for a backlash in the end. But, honestly, after the Scootaloo's chapter I ready myself for the worst possible thing everytime.
P.S. Are you still going to continue the alternative timeline where the CMC are rescued? At this point, I'm more interested in that. I mean, it's clear that from here it will never get any better so it's getting just sad and repetitive.
P.S. You know, I've grown to fear this fic. It's both repelling and amusing, and I don't think I ever said it but I think this is written very well.
So Apple Bloom get sent to a rich estate to be a sex slave to a billionaire? I thought it would be what happened to Sweetie Belle. And given the fact she knows where herself is, and that the billionaires daughter is secretly in love with her, surely you'd think Princess Luna could track Apple Bloom down easily. I mean she could go into Apple Bloom's dream, Apple Bloom could tell her where she is, and Luna could tell Celestia, and they would sent their personal royal guards to raid the place in secret, then, they could find out where the others are, and find Onyx and his gang, as well as find the turncoats of the royal guards are who give the villians warnings. But I guess it's not going to be the case.
I think I know what Sweetie Belle's outcome will be, and it could be a suggestion for the next chapter if you haven't thought of anything yet. I think Sweetie Belle would become a breeding slave to a secret illegal foal adopting ring. And she could be restrained, and be kept constantly sexually stimulated by vibrators secured in her pussy and ass when she's not being used, until she was ready for breeding. That's what I think should happen to her.
Also, I hope you write the aftermaths of what happened to each of the CMC after the events of the alternate ending, and how they each cope with what happened to them.
I also wonder what if Onyx and his gang would abduct colts too, instead of just fillies? And I wonder what they do to colts if they do?
8380238 I do have a plan in mind for Sweetie already, but thanks for the suggestion. Also, yes I do still plan on following up on the other "ending" (I need to stop calling it an ending, there's more story after it than before it,) I only have one more chapter before I'll start on that. I didn't want to write a rescue for Apple Bloom in this version since that's not what this one is about, but I wanted to leave a lot of room in this chapter for that. She is in the easiest to escape scenario
I honestly feel bad for Applebloom here, So close to escape but not a chance too. I really worry about Sweetie Belle though, she was knocked up first so I could see that making her less sellable to a client. The bit that gets me is why hasn't Discord been asked to help?
9224188 I am working on it right now actually. I have this as completed because I plan to post that separately, sinde it is going to be a bit different.
A good Plan Apple Bloom.
Finally another chapter!
Now I can continue writing my story on this
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Yeah sorry. This took way longer than it should have.
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In honesty I thought Sweetie Belle was the next one
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She was, originally. I flipped hers and Apple Bloom's before starting though.
3 years?! well that's depressing
I was expecting for a backlash in the end.
But, honestly, after the Scootaloo's chapter I ready myself for the worst possible thing everytime.
P.S. Are you still going to continue the alternative timeline where the CMC are rescued?
At this point, I'm more interested in that. I mean, it's clear that from here it will never get any better so it's getting just sad and repetitive.
P.S. You know, I've grown to fear this fic. It's both repelling and amusing, and I don't think I ever said it but I think this is written very well.
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Thank you. Yes, I am planning on continuing the CMC's rescue version. I just have one more chapter of this version first.
So Apple Bloom get sent to a rich estate to be a sex slave to a billionaire? I thought it would be what happened to Sweetie Belle. And given the fact she knows where herself is, and that the billionaires daughter is secretly in love with her, surely you'd think Princess Luna could track Apple Bloom down easily. I mean she could go into Apple Bloom's dream, Apple Bloom could tell her where she is, and Luna could tell Celestia, and they would sent their personal royal guards to raid the place in secret, then, they could find out where the others are, and find Onyx and his gang, as well as find the turncoats of the royal guards are who give the villians warnings. But I guess it's not going to be the case.
I think I know what Sweetie Belle's outcome will be, and it could be a suggestion for the next chapter if you haven't thought of anything yet. I think Sweetie Belle would become a breeding slave to a secret illegal foal adopting ring. And she could be restrained, and be kept constantly sexually stimulated by vibrators secured in her pussy and ass when she's not being used, until she was ready for breeding. That's what I think should happen to her.
Also, I hope you write the aftermaths of what happened to each of the CMC after the events of the alternate ending, and how they each cope with what happened to them.
I also wonder what if Onyx and his gang would abduct colts too, instead of just fillies? And I wonder what they do to colts if they do?
8380238
I do have a plan in mind for Sweetie already, but thanks for the suggestion. Also, yes I do still plan on following up on the other "ending" (I need to stop calling it an ending, there's more story after it than before it,) I only have one more chapter before I'll start on that. I didn't want to write a rescue for Apple Bloom in this version since that's not what this one is about, but I wanted to leave a lot of room in this chapter for that. She is in the easiest to escape scenario
I honestly feel bad for Applebloom here, So close to escape but not a chance too. I really worry about Sweetie Belle though, she was knocked up first so I could see that making her less sellable to a client. The bit that gets me is why hasn't Discord been asked to help?
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I see.
I'll be looking forward to it.
8395471 Some part of me sees Sweetie disowning her foal... either that, or becoming a gibbering mess.
At least, in the last part of her bad route. But will the good route start where the bad ends?
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Are you really going to continue the alternate ending:- https://www.fimfiction.net/story/360206/9/the-cutie-mark-crusaders-new-lives/theyll-be-ok-alternate-ending? Because this story has the completed tag on it.
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I am working on it right now actually. I have this as completed because I plan to post that separately, sinde it is going to be a bit different.