7975682 Both of these were debated pretty heavily by a few of us a while back actually! I plan on addressing both in the story itself soon, but I can explain here too. Basically, Luna's dreamwalking can't actually tell her where the dreaming pony is unless there is a clue in the dream itself. The only magic that can help is a tracking spell, and that requires being able to identify the specific trail you want to track. The girls went missing in town, finding which hoofprints were theirs would be next to impossible. Also... 7973608 7973973 Tracking spell, *nudge* *nudge.* There's still on chapter left. (Plus the alternate ending too I suppose.)
7975837 True... But it could be easy to I don't know... Ask them in their dreams?
Scootaloo is being violated in dreams and Luna appear making the pony dissapear
"Begone" Shout Luna
"Thank you, Princess... Oh yes... We are being violated by a trio of stallions, they catched us in X place, and they have X cutie Mark and X face, I can see X thing around" Say Scootaloo
7976463 A fairly solid point. I would still counter that the girls don't know where they are, and can't communicate it. However, you are right that this is a plot hole.
Rescue and Escape mission is a go. As Luna can communicate in their dreams, she should be able to locate them and get help. But what I like the most is that their sisters will search for them and make the kidnappers pay. Deathwish, no, One down difficulty for the kidnappers, if it was Payday 2
I really really liked how the chapter went and I can't wait for the next chapter to be really and I really hope awhile that the rappers get what's coming to them.
I was so hoping this was gonna be one of those stories where the bad guys won in the end.
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It's not over yet
When will the bad guys die or get arrested? I really want to see that.
I'm hoping for these evil pieces of shit to get their dicks ripped off.
The Plot thickens...
In theory there are a couple of "holes" in the story, first... Magic could make them easy to find... And there is also Luna traveling the dreams.
Bu not bad I suposse
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Both of these were debated pretty heavily by a few of us a while back actually! I plan on addressing both in the story itself soon, but I can explain here too. Basically, Luna's dreamwalking can't actually tell her where the dreaming pony is unless there is a clue in the dream itself. The only magic that can help is a tracking spell, and that requires being able to identify the specific trail you want to track. The girls went missing in town, finding which hoofprints were theirs would be next to impossible. Also...
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Tracking spell, *nudge* *nudge.* There's still on chapter left. (Plus the alternate ending too I suppose.)
7975837 True... But it could be easy to I don't know... Ask them in their dreams?
The next day, the stallions are captured
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A fairly solid point. I would still counter that the girls don't know where they are, and can't communicate it. However, you are right that this is a plot hole.
Needs a comma between the names: '“Apple Bloom Scootaloo, come over here please.”'
Rescue and Escape mission is a go. As Luna can communicate in their dreams, she should be able to locate them and get help. But what I like the most is that their sisters will search for them and make the kidnappers pay. Deathwish, no, One down difficulty for the kidnappers, if it was Payday 2
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Fixed, thanks for pointing that out. Hope you enjoyed the chapter
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I can actually see the crusaders saying that first part lol.
I don't believe it. Come on girls, you can do it.
I hope the bad guys get what is coming to them. Just a little slaughter would do justice here.
I hope you won't mess the escape up.
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By mess up the escape, I take it you mean have the CMC get caught again?
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Well, yeah. I thought it was obvious. Sorry if it wasn't clear.
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No it was, I just had an idiot moment is all
I really really liked how the chapter went and I can't wait for the next chapter to be really and I really hope awhile that the rappers get what's coming to them.