A good 16 years before the return of Nightmare Moon, another fantastic event occurred in Canterlot. All it took was one human who discovered the secrets of ponies, a zealous guard that would do everything for his country and a Princess who only wanted the wellbeing of her people.
A big thank you to Raharu for some ideas and an even bigger thank you to E.D. Garnot for proof reading this. If I don't get featured on EqD, it will only be because I didn't follow your advices stringently enough.
My main hideout: http://peacelovingmadman.deviantart.com/
Oh, for anyone interested, the story is a crossover with Tribunal from which it borrows its red thread. There is, I'd wager, little Elder Scrolls to actually be found here, unless you look really hard.
Wuts with the thumbs down? Dis good or what? Tribunal is good brah!
1203216 The thumbs down are from my first preview pic
It was quite terrible really and people judged my story "souly" on that
You have taken the heart of Vvardenfell and struck it with thunder.
ARE YOU MY SHARMAT?
Ripped it with clawed arms, levelled it in a way that the Rock of Lies cold not.
ARE YOU OLDER THAN MUSIC?
For behind every divinity there is a crime.
Alongside every race walk the beast-men.
Behind the blazing chest there is the heart.
WHAT I NEED IS LIGHT
WHAT I NEED IS A STAR
Where is my heart? Why have you not given it?
I was dragged along the path too quickly, and my face is broken and bloodied.
I can not see the world for the blur it has turned into.
WHAT I NEED IS
AN ANCIENT SEA
You alone can swim in the sea of life,
if you can witness the birth and conception is the question.
All that needs to be done is the divine act of humility.
All that is needed is Willpower.
The ending of the words is ALMSIVI
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I am impressed, good sir, and honoured that you should comment me with such a fine poem. Is this an original work? A cursory google search didn't turn up anything.
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It was inspired by the 36 Lessons of Vivec, with several sections stolen to mock the thrice-cursed liar .
I mean it was a review as well... inside the poem. In English the gist of it is: Slow down a bit.
Smell the flowers and give us some back story, you're rushing things too quickly.
1283937 Will do XD I am working on editing this... again.