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Dark Law


Control What Others Think About You. Free Space For The Free Minds.

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You have peaked my interest good sir.

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7856741
Good to know.
Im curious tho, what do you expect this story to be like? In general that is, nothing specific.

7859990 I expect it would be dark and somewhat gritty lol even if it's not, your story has potential

7860988
That's more or less what i'm going for, though i'm not sure how well i will do in that regard. I'm still experimenting at this point.
And thanks for the feedback.:twilightsmile:

Yes. I like. I needs more.
Gimme
Gimme
Gimme
Much like suck good.

when do you think the next chapter will be out?
I'm kinda hoping for the next chapter of this before the other stories i have...

7880958 Meh,:applejackunsure: give me about a week, I actually haven't written the second chapter yet.:twilightblush: 'Fucking minecraft'

7885606 try terraria...
Shit shouldn't have said that...

7887091 Nope, not again. I'm not Starting another game, minecraft already takes up too much of my time and if i start another game i'm not going to get anything done.

7887147 or warframe...
Dear god my steam is mainly used for warframe...

Ps.its free to play.

7887167 Tempting:raritystarry:, but i'm gonna say no, i'm literally a videogame addict and i would rather my grades not slip because i stayed up all night playing Warframe,. Heaven knows i'm getting there with minecraft already.

7887195 I have good grades and I normally play until...
Between 12:00at night and 3:00am normally starting around 3:00 pm so don't worry...

7887210 Ha, im not nearly that good then, in class i would either be asleep or still playing the game.

7887215 never said I wouldn't rather be asleep or playing. All I was implying was, ain't no game fucking my life over. That and I don't need sleep for some reason.
Edit: or nearly as much

7999406 oh before I forget you can ask me for suggestions if you want.
Btw if he knows about mlp then he should also know that giving whatever the fuck his name is, info is a bad idea...

7999429 He does in deed know, but i have some plans for that.

I WWWAAASSS going to wait a few weeks before releasing this chapter since it was the first time i finished 2 chapters in a week, but i love yall too much for that.:raritywink:

7887147
Do you play modded?
If so, what servers do you go on?

This story is confusing.
The story's short description (If someone offers to send you to equestria then don't accept I can tell you from experience they ain't sending you anywhere, at best you'll end up a disembodied spirit watching, while your clone enjoys the wonder of being 'equestrian') says that it's about a guy who is stuck watching a clone of himself having fun in equestria, then the long description says it's about a dragon.

I mean, sure the story is actually about a dragon, but it looked like you were also going to do the ghost in equestria thing at the start of your story but then changed basically everything a quarter way through chapter 2 because you didn't like something about it.

Also, sudden timeskip literally 60000 years... All these events that you referenced happening during this skip would have been worth writing about without skipping the time -- Not to mention the fact that basically the character's whole life as a dragon has been ignored until now. (Like how did the switch from being a human to being a dragon go? How did he learn all these languages?)

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Yea sorry about that. I'll change the short description.
As for the events before the 60000 year skip. I was initially planning to give a detailed synopsis of his life before the skip but after submitting the chapter I got a PM saying I failed moderation because it wasn't Mlp related, so i did the skip and i'm planning to do his life as a dragon in interludes.

How he became a dragon is in the first chapter. Last sentence before the skip, With details on how that works in the third chapter of the second scene.

As for the language thing, No Spoilers.:scootangel:

8133498
You're happy, that makes me happy too:pinkiehappy:, though why are you confused.

8133758 was extremely tired when i read it so i was confused

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Honestly, I don't even know. I have mostly lost interest in it and haven't even thought about in forever, but also don't want to say its dead. It crossed my mind to rewrite it with a more solid idea of what to do with it but can't find the motivation.

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