If someone offers to send you to equestria then don't accept. I can tell you from experience they ain't sending you anywhere, at best you'll end up a disembodied spirit, while your clone is sent off to enjoy the 'wonder' of being equestrian.
7999406 oh before I forget you can ask me for suggestions if you want. Btw if he knows about mlp then he should also know that giving whatever the fuck his name is, info is a bad idea...
This story is confusing. The story's short description (If someone offers to send you to equestria then don't accept I can tell you from experience they ain't sending you anywhere, at best you'll end up a disembodied spirit watching, while your clone enjoys the wonder of being 'equestrian') says that it's about a guy who is stuck watching a clone of himself having fun in equestria, then the long description says it's about a dragon.
I mean, sure the story is actually about a dragon, but it looked like you were also going to do the ghost in equestria thing at the start of your story but then changed basically everything a quarter way through chapter 2 because you didn't like something about it.
Also, sudden timeskip literally 60000 years... All these events that you referenced happening during this skip would have been worth writing about without skipping the time -- Not to mention the fact that basically the character's whole life as a dragon has been ignored until now. (Like how did the switch from being a human to being a dragon go? How did he learn all these languages?)
Well sheeit thanks for the shout out!
7999303 No prob.
7999406 oh before I forget you can ask me for suggestions if you want.
Btw if he knows about mlp then he should also know that giving whatever the fuck his name is, info is a bad idea...
7999429 He does in deed know, but i have some plans for that.
7999490 planned...
Sry
This story is confusing.
The story's short description (If someone offers to send you to equestria then don't accept I can tell you from experience they ain't sending you anywhere, at best you'll end up a disembodied spirit watching, while your clone enjoys the wonder of being 'equestrian') says that it's about a guy who is stuck watching a clone of himself having fun in equestria, then the long description says it's about a dragon.
I mean, sure the story is actually about a dragon, but it looked like you were also going to do the ghost in equestria thing at the start of your story but then changed basically everything a quarter way through chapter 2 because you didn't like something about it.
Also, sudden timeskip literally 60000 years... All these events that you referenced happening during this skip would have been worth writing about without skipping the time -- Not to mention the fact that basically the character's whole life as a dragon has been ignored until now. (Like how did the switch from being a human to being a dragon go? How did he learn all these languages?)