• Member Since 18th Dec, 2015
  • offline last seen April 11th

Jonny Bench


My introduction to our amazing comunity was through cupcakes but i started watching the show reading fan fics and now here i am!

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Night shade is a skilled mercenary with a troubled history. He is the youngest pony to be named most lethal creature alive, and he lives up to his title, taking jobs whenever he believes he is needed. However, when one of the princesses ask him to take a job that is highly classified, he finds that he may be in a more permanent position than he originally thought.


I do not own the art, and only found it on internet. Plse no hate

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

I need more i can't wait till he meets the Mane 6

I cant wait for more

No come on I want more

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7754882 working on next chapter now. May post later tonight, or early on wensday

hmm im slightly dissapointed that she believed a colt was a hitpony right off the bat i was expecting some kind of show to let her know he's the real deal

7857081 i get what you're saying but i promise there will be more action in the next upload. Also, she's thousands of years old. I'm pretty sure it's gonna take a bit more than that to surprise her. However thank you for your criticism and it will definitely be acted upon.

Two things that I need to point out:
1: It would be interesting to see some kind of flashback to see how Shade became the colt that he is now or an origin story.
2: Love the Assassin's Creed reference that shade pulled of at the end. Beautiful

LOVE THE STORY KEEP IT UP!

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