• Published 27th Nov 2016
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Forest Trees and Morning Tea - PonyThunder



Fluttershy enjoys a calm, uneventful morning in the setting of her quaint, cozy cottage and the surrounding forest.

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Forest Trees and Morning Tea

This is intended to be atmospheric. Listening highly recommended.


A peaceful melody of chirps and squeaks gently awoke her from slumber, as they always did.

In the moments before the dawn, the forest came to life as the day began anew. The air was crisp and cool, and the sound of a distant breeze could be heard meandering through the trees. The birds amidst the branches slowly joined each other in a symphony of unique and interesting calls as the morning light from the sun began to set the air aglow with orange. Small woodland creatures scurried about on the cold forest floor, still wet from the morning dew that had collected upon it.

Inside her cottage, Fluttershy blinked her eyes softly as she came to from a restful sleep. But she didn't laze on her soft, warm bed for very long. She'd always been a morning-pony, mostly for the reason that it gave her the opportunity to watch and listen to the animals begin the day. She gazed out of the window from the second floor of her cottage to watch the birds for a few moments before heading downstairs to go through her morning routine. After a few seconds, a meadowlark who had apparently spotted her fluttered over towards the windowsill and took its perch upon it.

Fluttershy smiled and said hello to the bird. Its feathers were a mixture of black and a brilliant shade of yellow. It pecked curiously at the window towards Fluttershy, as if begging to come inside and be given attention, but soon thereafter it left the perch and flew elsewhere. She left the windowsill and took the stairs down towards the kitchen, her eyes and body still waking up from her slumber.

After putting on a kettle to make her morning tea, Fluttershy opened the back door of her cottage to spend a few minutes outside as it warmed. She gently let the door close so as not to disturb any nearby creatures and made her way towards the trees that surrounded her clearing of the forest, taking in the scents and sounds of the early morning along the way. This was the favorite moment of her day, just taking a quiet stroll through the trees in the time before most other's would willingly be awake. The air was quieter, and somehow seemed cleaner as well. The cold moistness gave it a texture that felt calm and relaxing, and the sounds of birds chirping in the air completed the picture.

A small squirrel happened to be scurrying nearby and took notice of the gentle pegasus. It clasped a small acorn between its tiny hands and stood up on its hind legs to look at her with its chest breathing rapidly. Fluttershy took a gentle step towards the creature and lowered her head closer to the ground to meet it at eye level, and the squirrel moved its head closer. She gently inched her nose towards the squirrel and the squirrel cautiously did the same, making sure that this gentle giant could be trusted. It sniffed several times, less than an inch away. In a fraction of a second, they touched noses and the squirrel instantly recoiled backwards with its prized acorn clutched before quickly scurrying away up a nearby tree trunk.

Fluttershy smiled. She knew what it was like to meet somepony new for the first time.

Continuing her morning jaunt through the forest, she came across several other creatures that decided to greet her. A family of blue jays came to the forest floor to exchange greetings. A trio of rabbits with fluffy tails emerged for some affectionate petting. She even came across a mother duck and her two little ducklings as they waddled along behind, following her every move. Every morning was always different, yet the same in the fact that it was always calm, peaceful and filled with energy. The morning sun had risen slightly higher in the sky, and already the moistness of the air began to dry. Fluttershy felt the warmth envelop her as she walked through the occasional ray of sunshine that pierced through the treetops high above. She took a few seconds to just bask in the sunlight and close her eyes as she listened to the birds sing above her.

After spending a bit more time outside enjoying the morning atmosphere, she made her way back to the cottage to pour a cup of steaming hot tea. Sitting at her small, cozy table beside a window to look outside, she poured the cup of tea and the steam billowed up from the cup. Fluttershy put her face into the steam at a comfortable level and took in the scent and warm moisture. After being outside in the cold, early morning for just a few minutes, it felt nice. She gingerly held the cup with both hooves and brought it to her face to take a small sip of the hot liquid. It traveled down, leaving a feeling of warmth and comfort in its wake, as the first sip always did. She took another sip and gazed out the window once more, taking in the landscape surrounding her cozy cottage. It was filled to the brim with life and energy, the vibrant colors of green brilliantly contrasting with the warm glow of orange in the bright blue sky. The trees shimmered in the sunlight as a calm breeze blew through them. Everything was alive and beautiful.

As the minutes passed and she carefully sipped from her morning tea, Fluttershy reflected on her thoughts. She didn't have any particular thing to ruminate on. No pressing issues, no upcoming events or gatherings. Not even anything mild or uninteresting. All that existed in this particular moment was herself, the forest and her cup of tea. Nothing more, and nothing less. And as she finished her cup of tea and the symphonic sounds of the forest were beginning to play with full force, she took a deep breath of peace and serenity.

Everything was perfect just the way it was.

Comments ( 54 )

Well, the title didn't lie.:rainbowlaugh:

7750540 She did meet a squirrel and a blue jay, if that's any consolation?

7750543 That could be considered eventful to her lol

*reads*

*mashes fav button so hard*

7750555 Glad you enjoyed it. I couldn't think of a story idea I wanted to write so I figured...why not write something with no plot! Just a little excuse to practice my setting description :twilightsmile:

This was really descriptive! GG!:twilightsmile:

7750606 Thanks, I appreciate it! :heart:

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Well, this is exactly what she'd do in the morning! And I love me the stuffing out of some Fluttershy, let me tell you.

Man, that was relaxing :twilightsmile:

. . . The music really helps. . . To make a good atmosphere. . .
Love the story too. . .

I know, Fluttershy is just too cute for words. . .

Wow...

This is the type of story I'd meditate to if it was read aloud. Can this please be a thing? I'd pay for just a straight-up CD or YouTube series of someone reading stories like this while peaceful sounds play in the background. Like a whole new type of ASMR.

Excellent story. Never before have I read something I'd consider soothing. :twilightsmile:

7751676 Thanks :twilightsmile:

If anyone feel so inclined, they're welcome to do a reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Wow that was somehow GOOD

You should make a series out of this for all of the Mane Six! I'd love to see what the others do on a daily basis.

You know, when there's no evil, possibly life-threatening monster on the rise.

Once again, my day has been made simply by a fanfiction :twilightsmile:

7755791 I thought about this, and your comment has made me feel more inclined to give it a try. They wont all be quite as "non-interesting" as this one, but I feel like that fits Fluttershy pretty well. I like the idea of doing six smaller fanfics of just...regular stuff happening. Thanks for your comment :twilightsmile:

If I do go through with continuing these, which one would you like next?

7751820 Y'all have inspired me to do just so! I'm working on it right now.

7756315 I finished it! Would you like it to send it via PM, or just post it in the comments?

7756401 Whatever is fine. Thank you!

7756408 Beautiful! You have a very nice voice :twilightsmile:

I added it to the description.

7756426 That was really sweet of you! I'm honored. :twilightsmile:

7756027 Thanks! I'd love to see Applejack or Pinkie next, maybe seeing what kind of chores Applejack actually has to do on the farm, or Pinkie greeting everypony in town. I think it'd be cool to see the other friends Pinkie has beside her Mane Six friends :twilightsmile:

Is it ok if i try to write a story bases on this series?
Something like a steampunk helicopter ride, like "Early flies and steaming pipes"

With the combination of the soundsame of nature and the beautifully descriptive writing, I received a calm enjoyable experience from reading this. I thank the author for writing this.:yay:

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Thanks, that was the intention. I appreciate it!

Full review here, but in brief: a soothing window into Fluttershy's world, plus I'm pretty much exactly the target audience for this. Hence, have an upvote. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for the review :twilightsmile:

And for the other one, although this one makes me feel better haha. The other ones of this variety are hit or miss though, tbh. I mostly made them as an exercise, but this was the first.

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You're welcome. Actually, I think the longer review is more positive! (Three stars is an above-average rating in my system.) Fluttershy is my favourite pony, so simply spending time with her in a quiet way is something I like a good deal. :yay:

Some nice filler time with Fluttershy.

Incredibly beautiful.
I really enjoyed this one, and I've got a feeling that your other stories would be great too. Real Slice of Life is just my cup of tea.
Surly ganna read more.
Thank you for the brilliant work(s)! :heart:

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Thanks! If you liked this one, you'll probably also like https://www.fimfiction.net/story/423499/a-cold-winter-morning as well. It's another one I wrote in this kind of style.

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Sure! I'll check that out later.:yay:

It's me again.:derpytongue2:

Well, actually, I loved this one so much that I've been trying to translate it into Chinese since yesterday, and now it's already half done.
Although this one is short, it is a big challenge for me. I've never tried to translate a story so beautiful and so descriptive before. You know, translate is easy, translate good is hard. But I would try my best anyway.

So, may I have your permission, please? :fluttershysad:

I'll attach these relevant information to the translation, including the Author, the Cover Art, and the link to here, so that everyone see the translation will see these information as well. And after I'm done, I'll send you a link to the translation.

Just want to share such a great piece, please allow. :pinkiesmile:

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Go for it! I'd love to see that link when you're finished.

10113076
Here it is! Sorry for the delay.

https://fimtale.com/t/11076

Actually, I already finished it the day before yesterday, yet I'm not 100% satisfied about my work. Now with two days polishing, it should be much better now. I hope you like it! :twilightsmile:

BTW, this is my favorite paragraph:

Fluttershy put her face into the steam at a comfortable level and took in the scent and warm moisture. After being outside in the cold, early morning for just a few minutes, it felt nice. She gingerly held the cup with both hooves and brought it to her face to take a small sip of the hot liquid. It traveled down, leaving a feeling of warmth and comfort in its wake, as the first sip always did.

This cup of tea warmed her body; warmed my heart. :heart:

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No worries! And if it makes you feel better, I am incapable of telling how good a translation it is :twilightblush: I'm sure it's great though. Thanks for doing it!

So clam, peaceful and quiet. Love it. You did pictured the atomsphere. What a morning!

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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

I did a reading of your story! YouTube Reading

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