Twilight and her friends get called to a strange town by the map. This is their first mission, so things should go smoothly, right?
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I do hope that the Mane 6 won't be stuck there, I mean Spike know's about the cutie map so if something happens to the Mane 6, like seeing their cutie marks on the map change into equal marks suddenly he would get in touch with Celestia and Luna and tell them what he saw happen on the map. I'd hate to be Starlight then, just think of it with Celestia and Luna suddenly crashing down into the Middle of the Town with an Army of Royal Guards and blasting anypony that tries anything to stop them.
Nice little set up, an easy start to introduce us to the world. It'll be interesting to see where this goes. Always nice to see people playing with the equality thing more often.
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I've got a rough idea of what I want, but I'm still fleshing it all out so that I don't get confused on my way though.
I know it's been a while. But is this story going to be continued? Because this is ticking so many yeses for me. The idea of a story about Starlight taking down the mane 6 sexually and then taking their marks to equalize them, one by one. The fact it's sexualized fits the plot in this so well and even feels like it did in the show, that whole thing could have some sexual rapey undertones. The first chapter starts out perfect, we get a nice description of the mane 6 and their assets to wet the appetite and get us excited. Plus, they are distinct from each other, so lends to possibilities. So please continue this.