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Pinkie pie at trembling in the dark the terror in her crying voice as she looked over remembering the past events and the terror that had happened as she tried thinking of what she done, and how it all began and knowing she could never escape her fate.

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Anstca

Anstca #1 · Nov 11th, 2016 · · ·

There's a few small errors here and there, but overall a pretty good story. Pinkie would be aware of everything because she had the power to break the 4th wall.

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mrmidnight #3 · Nov 11th, 2016 · · ·

7713702 glad you enjoyed it the story was ment to be shorter but the 1000 words thing killed me abit

PastelKitty #4 · Nov 13th, 2016 · · ·

Nice job. On this website, none of the ponies have free-will. XD

LadyTheLioness #5 · Nov 14th, 2016 · · ·

It's a great story but the errors could be worked on

blondishmeat61 #6 · May 10th, 2020 · · ·

Rip.
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