This story is a sequel to Black Light. The Rave Pony
The first love you have is always the best, well Rusty was Black Light's first love. They did everything together, but after Black Light had a falling out with her mother, she had to leave. Well, Rusty could never say goodbye. He eventually goes to Ponyville and finds Black Light, how will they react? How will Thunderlane react?
This is the prequel to Black Light the rave pony.
Warning: blood, mother hitting her children
this is the story of my OC's childhood, it's not the best story in the world.
Chapters (3)
Not too bad, but I would really like to suggest that you try changing up your dialogue tags a little bit. You end literally every bit of dialogue with he/she/someone said, and it starts to get really monotonous and repetitive.
Thank.you, I'm glad you like it I'll edit it some more Tomorrow