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ExceRainbowDash


Comments ( 10 )

First.
Damn, this is suspenseful! :rainbowderp:
I love this story. You are a very good writer.
Waiting for next chapter!

Damn! That was slightly unexpected. This sounds like a very sick game made by a very sick pony.....and it's awesome!:rainbowdetermined2: Keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

First to comment!:rainbowdetermined2:

Nice cliff hanger! I'm anticipating the next installment!:pinkiehappy: Aeon seems like he's gonna have a melt down, or slam the door shut to tell her everything, and to say she's next...am I right? I hope I am lol:raritystarry: See ya next chapter!

Am I the only one commenting on this???:rainbowhuh: Lol whatever :twilightsheepish: At least you know you have at least one fan!:pinkiehappy: I'm loving this story! And when he reached for the pain killers....i can guess what he did:twilightoops: I can't wait for a new chapter! See ya next time!:derpytongue2:

7697974 Thanks! You're like the biggest motivator for me to continue writing and publishing. Luv u <3

7698085 your welcome!:twilightsheepish: A good story deserves good comments! I'm glad I'm your biggest motivation.:pinkiehappy: I hope the new chapter explains why she is having those visions (though I can guess lol:raritywink:) keep up the good work! :pinkiesmile: I'll be here to cheer you on!!:yay:

Oh shit!:pinkiegasp: This got interesting!:pinkiehappy: Excerainbowdash, you have outdone yourself. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!:raritystarry: Poor twi and avany:twilightoops:

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I'm loving this story! :pinkiehappy: Can't wait to see what happens next!! You did some really good foreshadowing, so I can partially see what happens next:raritywink:
Happily awaiting the next chapter!:yay:

Wow...this is why for months she disappeared in the previous chapter. Lol this is getting better and better!:pinkiehappy:
My personal opinion, I would kill everyone and get it over with.:pinkiecrazy:

I'm getting a real resident evil vibe with this. And I love it!! Is there gonna be enemies or just them? :duck:
Waiting patiently for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

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