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Eisen


"A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men." -Roald Dahl

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After an apocalyptic superstorm devistates Ponyville, day to day survival becomes a challenge. Applejack is left to fend for herself, and in her journey, she seeks to answer what the storm was, if her family made it and just how large scale the event could possibly have been.

Special thanks to Doukzor100 for the awesome cover art!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 2 )

I really like this story set up, seeing Applejack discover this mysterious catastrophe seems very promising to me. :raritywink:

Besides I really wonder what kind of fertilizer Big Mac is using.

Another story by the Ironsmith! I can't wait to see where this leads. Solid start, but just something to keep in mind as you continue writing: After reading the Prologue, I felt your writing was missing a bit of the "Applejack :ajsmug: " flair in speech, her country accent and linguistics. You picked it up a bit better in the first journal entry. Also, acknowledge not only her mannerisms, but her habits and flaws as well. I trust your writing ability to do just that! Carry on with your excellent writing!

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