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Pensive Wright
I write clop. Mostly femdom, but some other stuff, too.
Pensive Wright
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This is dark, but still arousing. Man I am messed up.
Goood story, but of me wishes that he was the one doing the dominating.
Before I read, what is the Dark tag for ?
is it for
subjects of Rape, Femdom, Foal language, mind control, etc. Reader discretion is advised.
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By it's nature it's debatably dark, and I do make use of dark comedy.
7770028 so... jest the mind-control !?
Got your tenses mixed around.
Will this story have a happy ending? Also, why'd you post the chapter before I was finished prereading it?
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I wanted to keep my writing schedule on track, and didn't realize you weren't done. I'm sorry.
Also, maybe.
I thought Kratos was Greek for power?
7911007 He's the God of War. Presumably this semi-joke definition originated from how Kratos kills gods in the God of War series of video games.
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I am aware of who Kratos is. I was concerned over accurate terminology than puns.
7911942 ...It's not a pun. It's a reference that's been verbed.
The finish wasn't bad parse but it just felt like it was missing something at the end. It's like he's all alone again yah his friends will understand it wasn't his fault but it feels like emotional wise it would also been appropriate for him to jump off the roof head first due to guilt. I feel like sci-twi who gave off the impression?.. that she was more interested in him as a.. oh my God a male is actually showing interest in me... and her being less effected by the siren magic kinda situation at the lab would a been a better talker at the end maybe even had a session *wink wink* together in the classroom alone to prove it was more then just the magic affecting her. The ending just made me feel like a sad panda for him. I'm probably just over thinking it. Overall liked story I'd give it ...hymn... 4 outta 5.
Something tells me that Martin has rather androgynous looks.
And the story is finished. Still, it was one hectic ride of insanity and torture. I think one minor problem is that there's more exposition than 'show, don't tell'. Their regaining back their sanity could've been a way to transition towards the ending.
7770028 What dark comedy? I haven't seen any dark comedy.
What are you going to write next?
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Couple of in-progress projects. Can't say for certain what will be up on Fimfiction next though.
This story was amazing, fantastic work! Definitely one of my favourite stories featuring the Dazzlings. Oh and that ending was sooo Satisfying!
This is why Adagio is my favorite. She makes a perfect dominatrix. That image is almost as hot as...
...the concept of depicting evil, sexy, rape-hungry Dommes as heroes instead of villains. It implies they're morally justified in treating men like toys, and that it would be wrong for a sub to fight back. So femdom stories are about good versus evil: a sadistic dominatrix forcing a disobedient young man to understand his proper place beneath her. And the best stories are the ones where the "heroes" always win.
I loved the Dazzlings the first time when they were introduced and your version of them was quite surprising and as well eventful and enjoyable.The fact that they all perish was sad for me,but I still very much enjoyed this throughly.