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Intriguing. Gonna be interesting to see this story develop.
Also, as a lot of other people are doing to stories they like, have a moustache
I do not know how to
usea pony?raise?
cute begining.
no character tags?
7626522 sorry no tags but maybe down the line that'll change
7626393 lol I have no idea what that means...but thanks for the moustache, i'm new to the fandom and i'm trying my best...glad you are intrigued
Great chapter. Loving the story.
7651852 OMG thank you that just gave me the inspiration to work harder
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no problem. I'm real enjoying the story. Keep it up.
Think you meant Syrreth
7663552 Lol thanks for that i made a mistake :D
Great two chapter. I'm loving story so next chapter canterlot.
7672600 you would think that....who know it takes eight years to reach canterot lo
thanks for reading
7672630
Nooooooo!!! 8 years
Interesting
7675624 glad I peaked your interest
So the young pony Adventures begin.
Good chapter
7675961 Well to be fair i thought it was interesting before this chapter. I say interesting here because i assumed a time skip was coming but instead you seem to want to go into detail on Emerald's journey. So i'm looking forward to that, though you can time skip later either way I want find out
7676027 lol i knew people expected a time skip, not exactly go into details on her journey just key elements, her character is still shaping... don't wanna lose anyone in my weird story telling. o i'm being normal....for now
So twilight's 100 years older here interesting. Calling it now syreth's mother is ember. Oh can't wait to see how this goes.
daze time ?
days time...
7694692 just a few minutes for next chapter
7694638 ruined my surprise lol but it wasn't that strange huh....you seem really excited though
7694638 I would be placing a bet on that spike is the father as well
7694882 y'all are making bets on my story now lol dude
Aww Liz is adorable not a very pony name but meh still love her.
Great chapter 7 I'm love emerald. Yeah time skip
Great chapter 8 if Spike was the father he will never abandon his daughter, but maybe he did not know he have a daughter. Let find out If spike do have a daughter poor twilight
Great chapter 9 I hope lizzy dream come true in the end0
7695667 a daughter? what daughter haven't called a female dragon yet
Great chapter 10.
I can't wait to see princess twilight or (nerd princess twilight), and Spike. I hope spike is strong in the story
I think there are a lot of misused words from the beginning of the story to the current chapter I am reading...Many of them made no sense whatsoever. "She stared clear of them..." is an example...I don't understand this, at all. Maybe you meant "steared clear"?
Why the fuck did they attacked her with intention to kill without provocation?
There is being cautious and there is being psychotic warmonger or having severe anger issue (which point to an unstable mind).
Even with trouble, they would much more likely to "send a clear message" to the outsider(s) (no, not killing or maiming) that they are currently unwelcomed and should leave, or asking for help from the outsider(s).
7706329 you would think that right, I modeled them after a real tribe I had learnt about dude, they don't ask question they just killed the missionaries and those that entered their land. Questioning her asking her to leave, wasn't my intention.
If you don't like that they attacked AN OUTSIDER of their land well to bad, I wanted them as teh savages from that certain tribe, couldn't see them any other way. At least they are not cannibals like the tribe.
7706329 Your views are welcomed but i would like if you would not curse please. Ues there are many mistakes in chapter one, honestly every time I'm going to fix them i either fall asleep from fatigue or am literally to lazy. So i leave it as is
Great chapter 11
Keep it up
7707710 I'm trying at least lol
I like the story so far ?
Great chapter 12
Glad you are back keep it up.
great chapter
Two of are favorite ponies on the cruise ship have fun and gambling away, what a life have.
7766607 lpl that's my nieces idea she wanted them to party a Little
Was the artist not giving the pony in the picture a cutie mark intentional?
7831108 yes...and I am the artist...she has not gained her cutie mark yet unfortunately.... It's all part of the story...thank you for your question Starlight Nova.
Great chapter they final going to meet the Twilight and Spike
Glad you are back. Grandfather Spike and grandmother Twilight. That great to now
7946459 Great grandmother twilight lol, I didn't know what to do there so just went in
I have been searching for this story for so long, I thought it was gone and now I have found.
Please continue this story!
10145665
I am going to continue it dont worry
10155315
yes!
OMG! He has hands!