7675961 Well to be fair i thought it was interesting before this chapter. I say interesting here because i assumed a time skip was coming but instead you seem to want to go into detail on Emerald's journey. So i'm looking forward to that, though you can time skip later either way I want find out
7676027 lol i knew people expected a time skip, not exactly go into details on her journey just key elements, her character is still shaping... don't wanna lose anyone in my weird story telling. o i'm being normal....for now
I think there are a lot of misused words from the beginning of the story to the current chapter I am reading...Many of them made no sense whatsoever. "She stared clear of them..." is an example...I don't understand this, at all. Maybe you meant "steared clear"?
Why the fuck did they attacked her with intention to kill without provocation? There is being cautious and there is being psychotic warmonger or having severe anger issue (which point to an unstable mind). Even with trouble, they would much more likely to "send a clear message" to the outsider(s) (no, not killing or maiming) that they are currently unwelcomed and should leave, or asking for help from the outsider(s).
Interesting
7675624 glad I peaked your interest
So the young pony Adventures begin.
Good chapter
7675961 Well to be fair i thought it was interesting before this chapter. I say interesting here because i assumed a time skip was coming but instead you seem to want to go into detail on Emerald's journey. So i'm looking forward to that, though you can time skip later either way I want find out
7676027 lol i knew people expected a time skip, not exactly go into details on her journey just key elements, her character is still shaping... don't wanna lose anyone in my weird story telling. o i'm being normal....for now
I think there are a lot of misused words from the beginning of the story to the current chapter I am reading...Many of them made no sense whatsoever. "She stared clear of them..." is an example...I don't understand this, at all. Maybe you meant "steared clear"?
Why the fuck did they attacked her with intention to kill without provocation?
There is being cautious and there is being psychotic warmonger or having severe anger issue (which point to an unstable mind).
Even with trouble, they would much more likely to "send a clear message" to the outsider(s) (no, not killing or maiming) that they are currently unwelcomed and should leave, or asking for help from the outsider(s).