7706329 you would think that right, I modeled them after a real tribe I had learnt about dude, they don't ask question they just killed the missionaries and those that entered their land. Questioning her asking her to leave, wasn't my intention. If you don't like that they attacked AN OUTSIDER of their land well to bad, I wanted them as teh savages from that certain tribe, couldn't see them any other way. At least they are not cannibals like the tribe.
7706329 Your views are welcomed but i would like if you would not curse please. Ues there are many mistakes in chapter one, honestly every time I'm going to fix them i either fall asleep from fatigue or am literally to lazy. So i leave it as is
7706329 you would think that right, I modeled them after a real tribe I had learnt about dude, they don't ask question they just killed the missionaries and those that entered their land. Questioning her asking her to leave, wasn't my intention.
If you don't like that they attacked AN OUTSIDER of their land well to bad, I wanted them as teh savages from that certain tribe, couldn't see them any other way. At least they are not cannibals like the tribe.
7706329 Your views are welcomed but i would like if you would not curse please. Ues there are many mistakes in chapter one, honestly every time I'm going to fix them i either fall asleep from fatigue or am literally to lazy. So i leave it as is
Great chapter 11
Keep it up
7707710 I'm trying at least lol
I like the story so far ?