"What exactly is in the saddlebag that you needed to bring in with you?"

Know where this is headed

like she was at the dentist and going 'aaah' for her teeth to be looked at.

She'll be going 'aaah' for a whole other reason

prodding further and further inside and spearing apart those lovely little petals.

I swear to goat, if you put a line like that in a straight fic, I'll cumsplode.

I'm not a terribly huge fan of Coco (*prepares for crucifixion*), but this was still a lovely read regardless. Some kinky dom Rarity is always nice, and I love the chemistry between the two of them. Seeing marshmallow horses as opposed to hooman horses was a bit of a surprise, but a welcome one.

I didn't spot any sort of errors this time around, either so good job with the editing, as well!

7588846 *cries with happiness* Thank you as usual my dear! Yeah, figured i'd change things up a bit for once. Variety is the spice of life and all that! As for the cumsplode... I laughed so hard, omg. I need to remember that for next time.

7591960 Haha, I've already received a downvote on my comment. Possibly because of my mentioning that I'm not a Coco fan? Ah, well.

It was definitely a welcome change! While I DO prefer the EQG humans (as you probably remember my mentioning), mixing some good ol' fashioned ponies in is never a bad thing. Perhaps, in the distant future, there could be a mix? Pony boinks EQG human or vice versa

Remember the line I mentioned, or the cumsplosion? Because I can go with either

7595589 ROFL! Yeah, I remember. All I can say is... hold onto your butts.

sexy, good job

7615195 Thank you.

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Thanks for pointing that out for me.