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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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Pinkie started out friends with Fluttershy but after seeing her best friend crying she goes all out to make her happier. A long few days lead to a relationship no pony could have expected in ways most memorable.

Complete; sequel here

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 25 )

I am your first like keep it up, Soldier

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Thank you sir. (Salutes)

I hope it works out, I have no idea where it's going yet.
Seriously.
:twilightblush:

looking forward to more

Muffin haggling, beautiful.

“No no no, it’s okay ‘Shy. She’ll be there at the same time as us. She’s always on time. Say, lookit that sky and all those stars out tonight. Do you ever wonder if Celestia and Luna really make them or if they’re actually giant balls of gas burning hydrogen or some other base element through a complex process of fission and fusion that also creates light and heat that could help lives on other planets like ours?”
“...”
“Or maybe they’re just fireflies that got stuck up there on that big bluish-black thingy?”

I understood that reference! :trollestia:

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Thanks... I'm trying to work references into my stories, I decided to start with the greats. I'm glad you noticed and thanks so much for reading! Maybe sure to track the story cuz the next couple chapters are doozies!

Pinkie hopped back from the stove as she opened the oven to see a perfect cake on the hot rack. Three tiers, each from a different type of cake, but each the shape of a butterfly. It’s because of her cutie mark if you didn’t get it, Pinkie thought then shrugged at her stray though.

Yep, Pinkie just broke the Fourth Wall. :pinkiehappy:

“I thought you’d never ask,” she said holding a for of her own.

I think you're missing a word here... Just pointing out an error, not trying to be rude. :fluttershysad:

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Just keep reading!
:rainbowwild:

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Should say a fork of her own.

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THanks for the input, do you approve of the chapter then?

6312657 Yes I do. I approve of it, even the part about Robins Will. Albeit sad, it was a vital piece of the story.

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Turns out Robins Williams ... last year to the day I wrote this. :/

I had no idea but I felt I had to use the name somehow. :fluttershyouch:

Thanks, I hope the next couple chapters are just as gripping.

6312869 I kind of figured it was homage to him. may he rest in peace. :fluttershyouch:

Just wanted to let you know, I went over your story and... well, I'm going to have to post them in gdocs to accomodate corrections and suggestions. PM me your google email address so I can give you full permissions.

I love Twilight's reaction to Flutters' being in a relationship. This was a great chapter :heart:

Holy heck
Flutters
Why would you reject her

I actually DO wonder why Pinkei pranked Flutters.

Maybe I missed a few details, or is the reason still to come? Must read on!

Why, oh, why, must time exist.

Now I can't continue reading until tomorrow.

//sigh

I love it. Pinks and Flutters being so dang adodable.

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Oh no, Pinkie's making way too many Fourth Wall breaches! We'll have to retreat! She's onto us!

HMM! HMM HMM! Very interesting!
Adorable!
Much feels!
I love it!

CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TOO--- Dammit Fluttershy... Ruining my song...
Anyways good start!:pinkiehappy:

[quoteDo you ever wonder if Celestia and Luna really make them or if they’re actually giant balls of gas burning hydrogen or some other base element through a complex process of fission and fusion that also creates light and heat that could help lives on other planets like ours?”
“...”
“Or maybe they’re just fireflies that got stuck up there on that big bluish-black thingy?”
[\quote]
Lion King

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