On the longest day of the thousandth year. The stars will aid in her escape, and she will bring about nighttime eternal.
"If we succeed in our quest Luna will be freed, and we shall banish the evil that has taken her. If we fail, Nightmare Moon will be released and nopony will be able to stop her."
The zebra Kamari, with the help of Sunlit Rain and others, starts a long quest to save Luna from her imprisonment on the moon.
This story takes place around a year or so before the first episode of season 1.
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Apr 15, 2021
This story is currently being rewritten. Some chapters may be changed or added to after upload.
Chapters (2)
What's the changeling tag for?
I'll definitely read further. This is nicely done and I like the ideas with Sunny and the towers. The adventure is surely gonna be good
However, there are a few things I'd like to point out. When you write a speaking action (said, replied, asked, stated...) following direct speech, you can't have a full stop here, but a coma instead.
"Write it like this," I said.
Second thing concerns the capitalization of names. When you check names of places, the keys or towers in this chapter have multiple (non)capitalized versions. They should be uniform.
Looking forward to read the next chapters!