You don't need friends, you've got Spike!
After an extremely unreasonable course of events, Twilight is forced into the realization that everything she had done over the last few years had been a figment of her own imagination, but that couldn't be true, could it?
Being thrust back to school is hard enough without the pressure of trying to discover why you're not an alicorn princess.
Warning: this story contains at least one pretty intense scene, but it's not too bad if you've ever been to a magic show.
Scientifically speaking, you couldn't possibly become an alicorn Twilight.
Livin' the dream!
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It's intriguing intense and interesting read I sense greatness in it more should be written well done
You hear that, that's the sound of a dying heart.
How is this relevant? Why is this author's note there? I can see it being an interesting bit of conjecture or trivia maybe-that's a big maybe-at the end in an author's note, but as it is here, this author's note serves absolutely nothing to the plot. Take it out of the story and bam, nothing is really different.
If you are going for something here, maybe with some hint at a plot thread in a future chapter, then it needs to be reworked badly, because it was rather jarring to read and broke immersion.
Moving on, this is an interesting premise and one I'll watch.
A quick question. Did you mean for all of Twilight's dialogue to sound off? I noticed that most of the dialogue barring the ending was a bit off and unnatural feelings, but considering the nature of Twilight's "dream" then that could explain the awkwardness, if said awkwardness was intentional.
Twilight, you are a dream of the fayth. *cue giant whale monster*
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I'm a bit of a theorist at heart and that part felt a bit dry, I can see why it might break immersion and would therefore be worthless to the plot unless expressed otherwise. I think I'll try to rework that into the story a little because now I'm clearly imagining why it felt nesisary in the first place.
All dialogue that feels off probably is there for the sake of making a character seem off or out of their element. Or I tried to make it that way at least..
Now this is something I've never seen before.
7564802 Okay, I think I get where you're coming from here. But, if it's relevant to the story, it should be integrated as is and not have to be explained directly in story.
Unless it's a fourth wall joke, in which case all bets are off and things are probably going to get weird.
Is this the real life?
Is this just fantasy?
Caught in a landslide
No escape from reality
This looks like it'll be a good story.
How is the next chapter progressing for you?