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Hey, I'm Kat4211. I'm a huge fan of MLP, even though I haven't been watching the show for long. My other main fandoms are Pokémon and Warrior Cats.

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Applejack and Rainbow Dash have always been locked in competition, looking for a way to prove that one is better than the other. Rainbow Dash is growing impatient - she and Applejack always tie, and now she wants to win. Then she thinks up quite the plan - flirt with her friend, tease her, anything she can do to make apple pony think a little more highly of her and admit who is truly the greatest. But it's just a game, right? They're not actually going to fall in love... (Rated teen just to be safe)

-cough cough- RD's a very silly pony to think that everything's going to go smoothly.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

I have to comment before continuing the rest of the story.

If Rainbow Dash was "fighting the urge to think", then she'd be trying her hardest not to think. Seems to me she's trying to do the opposite.

Otherwise I'm liking it so far and shall forge onwards! :twilightsmile:

Edit: Having now completed all the posted chapters so far, I have to say I like the overall idea and premise. However, while the writing is fine, I feel like it's a bit too wacky for my tastes. :derpytongue2:

*Several bad innuendos later.*

So flirting causes to ruin others' relationships? No wonder Rarity has no chance of getting a stallion ever.
Apple Bloom never told AJ about Tender Taps?

First of all I love the story so far keep up the good work and second OmniFox That has to be the funniest roast to Rarity I have ever read/heard

I like the story so far :)
Looking forward to more chapters x3

Is there anymore chapters coming soon? :pinkiesmile:

Why do you keep calling Applejack apple pony?

MOOOAAARRRRR:flutterrage:

I mean, if you wouldn't mind :duck:

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