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The Voice

Rainbow Dash has been hearing the Voice since she was little. Stuck with the complex decision to trust the voice or not, the voice soon shows its worth and she trusts it. But one day The Voice realizes it has the her control. Finally with a solid form, The Voice begins its work.

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Mares-a-Mares

Mares-a-Mares #1 · Aug 13th, 2016 · · · Chaper One: The Beginning and Ends ·

It's interesting for starters, but I feel like you could expand on things a little more, giving more details to the settings. Still, I liked it so far - I'd like to see where this one goes.

TheFangirlingFangirl

TheFangirlingFangirl #2 · Aug 13th, 2016 · · · Chaper One: The Beginning and Ends ·

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I'll take your advice. I'm also a little surprised someone actually read it.

SteffaniStar

SteffaniStar #3 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · · Chaper One: The Beginning and Ends ·

Interesting keep it up!

Moonlit Path

Moonlit Path #4 · Sep 10th, 2016 · · · Chaper One: The Beginning and Ends ·

I've lost 3 family members to cancer, and I can honestly say that it isn't an easy thing to go through. Awesome job. It brought back a lot of memories, and that just made me like the story even more.