Who ELSE could have do did doned it? Or, It was Applejack in the last car with a baseball bat!

by Lock Target

So there you have it!

So what did you think? Which one is true? WAS it almost everypony on the train? Or was it just a one-pony job? Perhaps three little fillies may have the answer. We'll leave that to the imagination.

Comments

[Eakin]

If you're going to use the comedy tag, try actually including something funny

[Rynn]

This wasn't really funny...
I'd also just like to say... that...
Well, I thought you'd be bringing up -actual potential culprits-..
I was very confused at the way it went down, and a story shouldn't be a headache to read.

[rainbowdash0301]

I thought it was worth mai time, but i was wrong

[Calen]

This seems more random than comedy. Was that what you were going for? Going over the top with suspects isn't funny unless you can give them really strange but believable reasons why they would be there.

And I think you should have longer chapters, just saying.

[Lock Target]

798553 I thought about doing that, but I chickened out.