Everypony knows that Rainbow, Rarity and Fluttershy took bites out of the MMMM and the other bakers ate some of their competition's creations, but what NOpony bothered to point out was that there could have been two other suspects that could have did do doned it, maybe even five! We have uncovered three alternate moments from the episode and will now share them with you.
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If you're going to use the comedy tag, try actually including something funny
This wasn't really funny...
I'd also just like to say... that...
Well, I thought you'd be bringing up -actual potential culprits-..
I was very confused at the way it went down, and a story shouldn't be a headache to read.
I thought it was worth mai time, but i was wrong
This seems more random than comedy. Was that what you were going for? Going over the top with suspects isn't funny unless you can give them really strange but believable reasons why they would be there.
And I think you should have longer chapters, just saying.
The Applejack one was pretty convicing but the other two were pointless, perhaps you could make a fourth alternate eding where Pinkie Pie alone is the sole culprit and have Twilight admit that she actually didn't think Pinkie Pie would sabotage her own entry, (She is the Cake's apprentice after all) and Pinkie Pie admits that she just couldn't resist, and then she launched the whole investigation in the hopes of throwing everyone off so she could get away with it, and have it so that Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Rarity tried to stop her but they couldn't see in the dark and were forced to give up.
798553 I thought about doing that, but I chickened out.