Thank you for everything guys.
She wish they would remember their bond of friendship.
Sunset Shimmer and her friends separated since they graduated from high school.
They haven't talked to each other in years.
They have gotten new friends and carried on with their lives.
But one day, Sunset Shimmer remembered the deep bond they had, and tries to rekindle their deep friendship.
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Interesting concept, although I personally don't think she would actually forget their names
Also: throughout the chapter you used aloud instead of allowed (I counted 3 times)
Yay the 2th chapter was posted on my birthday :3
Not bad so far. Keep it up.
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Thank you! And forgetting the names...it's kinda part of the comedy aspect. It's also been six years. Honestly, I would forget best friend's names after six years.
Oh, and the aloud thing...I'll correct those now! Thank you for bringing them to my attention!
7382939
Oh, that's great! Happy birthday!
7382973
Thank you! I'll keep writing!
7383414
Thank you!
I really like this idea, and you're doing a great job of writing it! Keep it up!
7383597
Thank you so much!
I see You there Friendship Is Witchcraft Reference.
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Glad someone caught it.
How sad will this story be?
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Hopefully not that much.
When I first saw the title I thought of something horrifyingly bad. It went a lot like, "No memories. Just disappear forever." Due to my mind thinking that there should be a period in there for some reason!
7384993 Oh God...that sounds dark...I was just trying to have a slightly dramatic title to attract people...but now I'm thinking of changing it...
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I know, right? But you don't have to. That's just me and I misread the title. But you can do what you want. I just hope I didn't sow any kind seeds of doubt into your young mind.
7385016 It's fine, it actually made me laugh. XD
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However, the title did give me an idea for a character to say in a particularly dark scene that I have now planned. I shall not be stopped.
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LET THE DARKNESS CONTINUE.
I want to read the fanfic with the dark scene in it. I'm already quite insane; and I'm looking for more dark stories to make me more insane.
You might wanna change the whole 'forgetting their names' thing. I haven't seen my high school friends in two decades but their names are still seared into my mind. Sunset might forget that dude who sat three desks in front of her, but I doubt she'd forget the human elements.
That being said, your writing is very good, especially for your age. Your portrayal of her reminiscing is quite evocative, no matter the realism of it. You could use a proofreader-- clunky grammar and misused words break immersion -- but you definitely have talent.
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This illustrates why proper punctuation is particularly pertinent. Let's eat, Grandma.
No, Pinkie. Why Olympia? It's such a trash city. And their beer was terrible.
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Reminds of something a friend said to me once. Déjà vu.
Also, eh, I think it's pretty easy to forget names, at least for me. I have high school friends, and I've forgotten about them completely, aside from their faces.
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But did you ever use the power of mediocre teen pop to summon a giant, laser blasting sky horse with those friends?
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I assume they'd try to rope me into that.
7386737
Ah. We had similar friends in high school, then. On that note, perhaps the reason I remember them so well is related to the number of scars they took part in the creation of.
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What kind of friends did you have?
I guess a friend from high school is the reason I'm here. But for entirely different reasons than you might be thinking of.
7386527 Honestly, I could have seen one of my friends turn into a monster-demon thing that opened portals to a magical world where there are tiny colorful horse versions of each human and still not remember that friend after six years.
And thank you very much! And I am getting a proofreader soon, so...yeah! The
7386563 Pinkie didn't know the beer was going to suck when she moved there.
She'll just order it from Sweet Apple Acres or something...
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The kind that liked making homemade explosives. Nuff said.
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Yeah, nuff said.
Oh man things got messed up and everything fell apart.
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Yep, pretty much.
*Sees story update.*
*Sees it rapidly got 2 likes.*
Good job.
7597854 Thank you. :)
I really hope Sunset ends up successful.
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Me too, superfun. Me too.
A reunion eh?
This outta be good.
This will be tough but if anyone can get the
bandgroup back together, it'd be Sunset.I think that there has to be a big get together in the future or this would be a bit of a sad story. I just hope Fluttershy´s all right. I know how much it sucks to get a leg broken because of a friend and not keeping in touch with those afterwards. Childhood memorys that you´ll never forget...
Will this ever be continued?