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Such a calm sexual scene. It's really suit with calm story...
But when I read the ruby heart scene. I suddenly feel bad for Barb(Female Spike). Oh...poor young dragon...your gift for your special crush was gave to another now....
I second Loveless's comment. Very nice, yet calm and smooth.
I think that many readers came here for the clop, but the leadup was incredibly satisfying to read and the general calm, un-rushed vibe was a great experience that I've always valued in a story. I agree with Loveless, too, about the sex scene - forgive the cheesy phrasing but that did feel much more like making love than just a clop scene. Well done !!
Amazing work, I loved the pacing. Not too slow that it bores the readers and not too fast that it seems rushed. And the romance just seems so flawless and natural.
All in all it is an amazing piece of work.