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Such a calm story...I think I understand Elusive feeling...Being artist just like him. Everyone keep telling us that our art is perfect but we feel like it the same. Nothing change. Nothing better....
Wish to see more of this also...
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Thank you for commenting! I will be honest, this is not my first time writing fanfiction, but it is my first time writing with this tone from the first person. I see there are downvotes... I don't really know if they are from the content or perhaps my own spelling and grammar errors. If that detracted from the experience at all, I apologize.
I'm glad you want to see more. If you have any suggestions feel free to PM me or reply to this comment.
I thought all of the main 6 were gender swapped?
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They are, I just made a typo while I was writing. I have no proofreader, so if my half-asleep head says it's right on the way for me to publish it, that's how it gets posted. Thanks for pointing that out!
Love finally start...Even if it really slow...
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Would you say that it being slower is a detriment to the fic?
Edit: I replied to the wrong person at first, I'm new here.
Such a calm sexual scene. It's really suit with calm story...
But when I read the ruby heart scene. I suddenly feel bad for Barb(Female Spike). Oh...poor young dragon...your gift for your special crush was gave to another now....
I second Loveless's comment. Very nice, yet calm and smooth.
I think that many readers came here for the clop, but the leadup was incredibly satisfying to read and the general calm, un-rushed vibe was a great experience that I've always valued in a story. I agree with Loveless, too, about the sex scene - forgive the cheesy phrasing but that did feel much more like making love than just a clop scene. Well done !!
Amazing work, I loved the pacing. Not too slow that it bores the readers and not too fast that it seems rushed. And the romance just seems so flawless and natural.
All in all it is an amazing piece of work.