• Member Since 31st Mar, 2016
  • offline last seen May 24th, 2023

Derped Kajar


I'd give an intro but I didn't have all CUSTARD,So do yourself a favour and come own down the Strayan city where the beach is red and the wallabies pretty. I own the avatar.

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What happen when the p-800 is sent back to kill twilight and a newly banished Discord is the onley one to stop it. We will find out.

I do not own cover art, and constructive feedback would be great considering this is my first story. So do yourself a favour and come on down. The terminator is owned by James Cameron( and secretly Michael bay)

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A good first attempt, but your spelling and grammar are appalling. I'd suggest setting it aside for a week or two, then revising it; it's always more difficult to edit your own work immediately.

7324424 thanks I'll take this into consideration.

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