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Spike's new friend

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Silver Topaz

Silver Topaz #1 · Jun 8th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Pretty nice start, I recommend that you start a new paragraph every time a new character speaks, although you did say who was speaking so that was good. I can't wait to read more.

Silver Topaz

Silver Topaz #2 · Jun 8th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

Well the mood certainly changed. I want more please.

I also suggest not insulting popular characters. It might bring hate from their fans.

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Jun 8th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Sign them up!

OmniFox

OmniFox #4 · Jun 9th, 2016 · · · Chapter 3 ·

And by see the princesses again he meant his mom and aunt.

Sarged

Sarged #5 · Oct 11th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

Uh....

He went around town trying to find where the fuck Octavia lived and was told the address by some little sorry fuck probably some little motherfucking stalker or something but that fucking shit didn't matter because at least he found Octavia's house and he went to knock on the door of her house but instead of finding a grey mare with a black mane he found a stupid bitchy white mare with a weird ass blue mane.
“Hello is Octavia here.” said the dumb purple dragon.
“ Yeah she's here” replied the stupid white haired odd pony.

Well then.