What happens when Pinkie finds a point that no one else can see, and doesn't let anypony pass just to win a round of King of the Hill?
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Real life is overated, and sanity is not required. And mountains actually don’t exist.
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GET-OFF-THE-POINT.
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No!
I was more of a CP kind of
personstallion. But this gave me a chuckle, loved the idea of Pinkie Vision.7249852
Thanks. It was an idea from Pyrovision
Theme song for this story.
This point is mine! DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT?
I love all the feedback this story is getting!
7252872
How so?
Could use an edit and a bit of work in my opinion, and like others have said the ending was more annoying then anything else and took away from the story.
And o do find it odd that upon seeing the hill with the goggles Twilight would just walk off even if it was pinkie pie I don't think the scientist Twilight would just walk away from a new discovery and seeing her freak out about it or get dragged into the game would be amusing and add to the story IMO.
also Twilight reaction to a turret being built seemingly by magic and something she had most likely never seen before and just shrugging it off once more is also off.
Basicly as I said this could use an editor for spelling errors I saw and also the other issues I mentioned and this could be a rather amusing story because as it stands its not the best for something labled as comandy. Its got random down though to am extent.
Not trying to be mean, just expressing my thoughts on the story is all.
7256653
That's fine.
This is my point now
8164997
No it is not.
8167728 I used the pain train to capture it faster on scout (times three capture on randomizer)
8167795
But I had sentrys guarding the point!
8169039 I always keep my strange red tape recorder handy as well as a Sydney sleeper
8169039 on a more serious note you should make another one where all the ponies can see them and fight them