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CosmicDreamerWrites


An amateur writer and blogger.

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A mysterious book, a forgotten story, and the return of an evil tyrant. Will the power of Love save the Kingdom of Crystal Ponies once more? Or will Shadows rule the lands.

Upon finding a book the Crystal Empire, Cadence finds out the past and fall of the evil tyrant Sombra. All seems lost when Sombra returns for the Empire, But a mysterious mare appears with knowledge that may help stop the King of Monsters. Once and for all.

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Comments ( 6 )

I'm going to track this until a few more chapters are out, then it's reading time! :raritywink:

Sorry to do this, but I saw a few mistakes:

But not everypony was thought everything was back as it should be.

I think the "was" shouldn't be there.

"Cadence? ...What is it?" Shining asked with concern in his vice

Should be "voice".

The Alicorn of Love looked up at her beloved husband with fear. It was a diary from one thousand years ago!"

Missing the beginning ... whatever this " thing is called in front of "It".

Now that's out of the way; looks like you have a good idea here. Have a like. :yay:

Comment posted by CosmicDreamerWrites deleted May 9th, 2016

7198571 I think that I should also point out; that's not how you respond to comments:twilightsheepish:
There's a little tab on the top right of a comment.:pinkiehappy:
Took me a while to get it too.
I'll get back to the story soon. :yay:

But know thing!

This?
Well that was pretty good. Short and sweet and we know where we're going. :pinkiehappy:

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