A mysterious book, a forgotten story, and the return of an evil tyrant. Will the power of Love save the Kingdom of Crystal Ponies once more? Or will Shadows rule the lands.
Upon finding a book the Crystal Empire, Cadence finds out the past and fall of the evil tyrant Sombra. All seems lost when Sombra returns for the Empire, But a mysterious mare appears with knowledge that may help stop the King of Monsters. Once and for all.
I'm going to track this until a few more chapters are out, then it's reading time!
Sorry to do this, but I saw a few mistakes:
I think the "was" shouldn't be there.
Should be "voice".
Missing the beginning ... whatever this " thing is called in front of "It".
Now that's out of the way; looks like you have a good idea here. Have a like.
7198571 I think that I should also point out; that's not how you respond to comments
There's a little tab on the top right of a comment.
Took me a while to get it too.
I'll get back to the story soon.
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Oh. Thanks.
This?
Well that was pretty good. Short and sweet and we know where we're going.