Wonderbolts are in Appleloosa and who else but Braeburn knows the Captain. But when her coltfriend seems too be hiding something who's going to tell Spitfire the truth?
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Great start on the story. Not rushed.
When's the next chapter?
Appleloosa
I think it is supposed to be Fillydelphia.
7158180 Thanks:) I'm hoping to have it come out Wednesday, I still have a few things to fix. The next chapter is my favorite so I hope you stick around:)
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I'll be waiting for the update. I'll always stick around, don't worry.
Sorry, forgot to tell you this.
And I think what you're trying to say is casually. Causally means of, constituting, or implying a cause.
1. name's (or name is) I am not really sure if name's is correct
2. Spitfire's
Nice story, although I suggest you get an editor for grammar and punctuation. And the paragraphs are a little awkward, too. Please, don't take this the wrong way
Well this is a pleasent fic so far. I'm not gonna badger you with grammer or anything since I can read it just fine, but I'm liking what I see. Some SoarinJack and tiny bits of MacDash, and some BraeFire. Haven't seen the last one before so that's interesting to see.
So I'm guessing Money Bags dates mares to get their money before leaving them. If so, well, at least Mac and Braeburn know. If they let Soarin know too before doing anything it might help. But how do Mac and Braeburn know, but not AJ? Isn't AJ the one who knows the ins and outs of her family the most? How could she not recognise the name? And Money Bags is kinda stupid for agreeing to go to the Apple's homestead since he apparently dated a pony called APPLE Strudle.
Still liked and faved though.