I have a high-leveled imagination but I'm still learning how to express it. This is my works and I hope you will like my ideas.
A story with many ponies, many humans, one portal and one big secret. Who are the Humans and what they really do in Equestia.
We will try to find it out with Detective Grim, Princess Luna, Princess Celestia and their new unexpected friends.
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I hope the ponies lose. It's more fun that way.
I will be brave enough to give you a little hint. Story will be more interesting than simple pony-human conflict. I can't tell you more now but I promise it won't be banal story about open war.
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Ummm.... The grammar needs a lot of work. Plus the idioms. You can mostly tell what is going on. But yeah. It is also moving a bit too fast.
I cant deny that my grammar need to fix. That's why I looking for editors. But can you be more...specific? What should I change primarily?
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Nice story, just pay attention to grammar and idioms. The story builds up too fast and this may ruin the suspense. Aside from that, well done.
Why, thank you! Comments like your making my enthusiasm to continue. It's just a start of a big story and I will try to focus on details if everybody thinks that it goes too fast. Thank you for your comment :)
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7119504 Now that's the spirit! Just a little life hack: if you want to use some more advanced words, check the word you want to use on google translate (or translate it from your language) and look for synonyms.